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My very first 1 Star rating. Yay! \o/

When I first heard the news, I literally did a double-take. Totally killed my mood to do anything else that day. Rest in peace to all those that passed away and condolences to those involved in this tragedy.

What is a Tony?

The way I see it. If you enjoy what you are writting chances are people will like it as well. If you hate wrtting something, why would someone else like what you clearly hate?

Yeah, chapter is drafted back in May. Didn't publish it till recently. Well that's a bummer.

Well... That's a totally different story.

I like to believe the author deserve to rate and review his own story. :blob_nom:

It's not really about how soon, but how consistent it is. If you go off with a bang, make sure to keep that high consistent. Also, even if the charaters are not well developed, you could always use the comedy aspect to develop them. Take for example a series called 'The Mentalist' each episode...

I derived comedy by two simple meters. Is your intention is to make me laugh? Is the essence of making me laugh present throughout the story? If it's yes, then I call it comedy, else it's Comedy at parts at most.

It's about the process of learning and improving yourself! I'm still an amateur at it too! I started off just writting as well, but when I re-read my stories I just know it was trash so I research up a bit on how to make it better and eventually I got the basics down. It's not perfect but at...

First person if you know your character's personality. It comes with the advantage of knowing your characters first thoughts and how he sees the world. It also allows you to point out his immediate emotions and how he reacts to the situation. I find the third person easier to tell stories...

Yeah, I wouldn't have complained much if my series didn't group together with series that was released in May rather than one released in July. That's is how far back in the Latest series it is.

The term Son and Private organs usually gets me cracking the most.

I would write this as maybe a simple chapter of a thousand words, but the simple rules of UNO would mean I have very little plot device to move the story along. It doesn't matter how good the cast of the story is, my problem lies within the game itself. Unless the other uno games are fair game...

I've just posted my series about yesterday, but I noticed that the series isn't showing up in the Latest Series Tab. I did some digging and went through each page of the Latest Series only to find my series at page 11. Isn't that a little bit too far. :blob_teary:

I remember reading a lot of Enid Blyton as a child. That's like the only real non visual novels that I remember reading. The other things I remembered reading were mostly comics and Mangas. It wasn't untill highschool when I got into light novels. The first light novel I've read was a book...

Sometimes you just have to tell yourself that things need to be done now and slap yourself if you aren't doing it. Other than that, just take sufficient breaks, you got a life to live after all.

I skimmed through 0 and 1 and a bit of 2. I got a few points to throw in here. Simply put, your dialogue needs work. Some of it is too long without breaks in between. I can understand the need to inform the aufience about things, but you are using dialogues as an exposition tool too much, it's...