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What i want to say, is that you are going too much in the far end of "artistic path" The "i throw paint on canvas" kind of lunaticy. (you are not, but its kinda feels like that and i feel the need to wake you up) You are still you, but sometimes, you need to cater to the mainstream if you want...

Pretty sure DJ okawari didnt expect their music to be THAT FAMOUS.

I think, compared to copying or taking inspiration from Fugue. You should do whatever "you feel right". BECAUSE you try to do like the video, you confine yourself and your imagination. Heck, just do random notes, as long it "sounds good" = you did a perfect job. Bc yes, in the end, like humans...

0:20->0:23 you got this smoothness that is enjoyable. Elijah. Do not forget that basically, human beings are a useless piece of meat, that react biologically to "noises" (in general meaning) Ears, since times immemorial, will prefer this or that noise or certain frequencies. Or hate sounds...

People dont want to have a potato and salt. What they want is a salty mashed potatoes. The ingredients are 100% same, but the difference of appreciation is 10000% not the same.

its not really a problem the problem is that you dont know how to fusion them like Gogetta. (Vegeta + Goku)

That is the thing. People dont care if you use a 5m$ guitar or a garage studio. As long its good, you are a god.

Basically. Like cooking. Music is A PUZZLE. You must fit each other to do the perfect form.

Yes.

Btw here is an example of : (repetitive sounds in background) First listen without bothering to study the song. (Read rest only after listening once) THEN REPEAT. And focus on noises in background. There is a CLEAR snap finger noise. That is very annoying usually and/or when you discover it...

For the blue sky one its 11?/20 and its bc im kind. If i was the food judge harsh guy, its a 9/20 or even 5/20 GTFO of my kitchen.

30s is far too long build-up. Especially with low attention span people nowadays. Also with how long the build-up goes, it goes too loud. Its like the mockery-joke : do you want to go to heavens !?!! (using this analogy not to mock but that basically it goes too far(up)) Not very fan as it...

That is why i said early on : focus on your microphone (recording/mixing) skills.

That is the thing, they dont. Your idea is good, but reality isnt like that. It is impossible to make ALL OF THEM as protagonist.

I am not. Usual PC. I guess that is why you dont feel problems.

Yeah i understand what you mean, in fact heard some songs do that. But things is, it must be in background, EVEN FORGOTTEN or not knowing it exist. But right now, its too obvious. FAR too much.

Hm.....I think you need to focus more on working on your "editing skills" or your microphone. Its very amateurish. Like a singer/kid that sing very closely to the microphone. = not sure if fault of the micro or kid not knowing how to use one.

LASTLY. VERY IMPORTANT. The smooth sound of the piano. (the one in background) IS PERFECT. Chef kiss lvl.

-Like a producer or mixer (whatever name was for this job, i forgot) said a song, is basically ONE PRINCIPAL PROTAGONIST and rest is to "support it/green leaf it". Like a story. -and/or i remember the trope, where a singing group is criticized and MC say : you guys keep trying to fight to...

What i recommend is first : -what is your goal ? I thought : did elijah meant to do a relaxing song (sky theme and pic) ? But then 5s in and you get this DWANG DWANG piano sounds.