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  1. Rosica

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    The zero to hero experience is not very popular with modern audience. I believe the time skip is a deliberate choice because Bimbanana main platform is RRL. He know his audience well.
  2. Rosica

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    Edit the merged review and that post. Put the review in that post.
  3. Rosica

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    Reserved as greyblob requested.
  4. Rosica

    What are SH writers reading?

    Having a very low expectations is a good thing. You will be less likely to get disappointed.
  5. Rosica

    I will judge your book by its cover (pic, title, blurb and few pages) –– AI ASSISTED WORKS ARE WELCOME –– CLOSED (3/3)

    You can use the following synopsis formula: For example: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2094923/i-am-not-a-demon-queen/ High schooler Xiao Ling + the world remembers her as the vicious Demon Queen + Now trapped in the fragile body of an ordinary teenager + the once dignified immortal must...
  6. Rosica

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    I want to open mine, but plenty of people who want feedback keep creating their own threads and ignores threads created for the purpose of giving feedback. This one actually have some engagements. Is it fine if I stay here? You can keep giving your feedback, and I will tell people what you...
  7. Rosica

    I will judge your book by its cover (pic, title, blurb and few pages) –– AI ASSISTED WORKS ARE WELCOME –– CLOSED (3/3)

    Let me give you my honest feedback then. Some readers dislike it if your story have too many one sentences paragraphs. The synopsis need fixing too.
  8. Rosica

    You're an aspiring practitioner, try not to deny it.

    You're an aspiring practitioner, try not to deny it.
  9. Rosica

    You can be Gibran, Ohim, or Arsa Bagus. Choose your fighter.

    You can be Gibran, Ohim, or Arsa Bagus. Choose your fighter.
  10. Rosica

    I will judge your book by its cover (pic, title, blurb and few pages) –– AI ASSISTED WORKS ARE WELCOME –– CLOSED (3/3)

    You can't do that. No one here is an elementary student. Try a different incentive. Like the 19 million job openings.
  11. Rosica

    Ah, I see the issues now. Thanks for that. Looks like a generic Xianxia to me.

    Ah, I see the issues now. Thanks for that. Looks like a generic Xianxia to me.
  12. Rosica

    That’s fair. I’ll try reading the chapter Macha edited and see if I can pinpoint the AI smell...

    That’s fair. I’ll try reading the chapter Macha edited and see if I can pinpoint the AI smell. We can leave it here for now.
  13. Rosica

    You mean the sensory details?

    You mean the sensory details?
  14. Rosica

    Those patterns are called rhetorical devices. They exists in every elevated or polished writing...

    Those patterns are called rhetorical devices. They exists in every elevated or polished writing. But AI overuses them a lot because it knows no moderation.
  15. Rosica

    @WelcomeToSH fufufafa's alt!

    @WelcomeToSH fufufafa's alt!
  16. Rosica

    Means vs. End

    Aleph and Beth stood at the edge of a quiet world, watching time pass like a slow river. “I only want one thing,” said Aleph. “Immortality. Once I have it, I am done.” Beth glanced over. “Done? What does ‘done’ even mean if you never end?” “It means I reached my goal,” Aleph replied...
  17. Rosica

    Can't you just use dark mode and turn the page black?

    Can't you just use dark mode and turn the page black?
  18. Rosica

    [Quick Q/A]

    There are some tells if someone is a thieving translator who don't write the stories they publish. Look at how often they update their story and how many of them are. Someone with 5 ongoing stories all updating daily have more chances of being a translator than an author.
  19. Rosica

    [Quick Q/A]

    Everything written by a non-native speaker is a translation. I have to translate my thoughts from Kazdelian to written Victorian just to have this conversation with you. If you mean illegal translations where the original author is not credited, it's been taken care of in this site. You can...
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