Honestly, there is nothing productive I could tell you. I'd only be repeating what blob said.
That you question my words make you better than most who would blindly follow everything I said.
I don't come to that conclusion. The conclusion come to me. ClosedAI diagnosed me with derangement. Treat every advice I give you as a rambling of an asylum escapee.
I don't think he need our help. He have already written four books before and I see no major issues with this one. I believe he has reached the peak of his growth as an author and is hitting a plateau. That is the problem. He is stagnating.
Sometimes, the only way to become better is to get...
How anticlimactic.
This is unlike you, where is the roast? Are we feeling uninspired today?
The mc is only a bit insane. That's a dealbreaker to me. Insanity have no limits. As a Malkavian, I'd know.
Make the mc crazy crazy. Don't hold back.