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Impressions as I read: Synopsis: The first sentence sort of makes me tilt my head. What does it mean? Something feels like it's missing in the synopsis... I feel like you are mainly trying to sell the setting in your synopsis, but what if I'm not very interested in the setting and I'm more...

I've run out of ideas. xD But I finished my outline! I think maybe I'll try to write this one in its entirety before posting it since it's only 10 chapters.

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I’ve never played it! ^^ But I won’t deny that it sounds super cool XD I may have been influenced~

This is a story that reuses the Familiar-Operator setting that I've previously described. This is a world where "Operators" (Mages) can only perform magic by passing it through their “Familiar” as a catalyst, so every magician has at least one familiar. Familiars in this world tend to be...

Finding a story I want to stick with is hard. :blob_no: This is the premise for a BL harem and comes from one of the poll scenarios. So the MC is prince in a fantasy universe, and all royalty in this universe have shapeshifting familiars (i.e. dragons, griffons, pegasi) who also double as...

I do but this thread is actually for writing things rather than just outlines! I'll probably add some scenes when I have time

Only Slightly Melancholy Synopsis: 33-year-old ⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛ is only slightly melancholy. As the Magical Girl of Evil and Darkness, she's supposed to be ultimate supervillain of the local city, except on most days she's too tired to do anything particularly nefarious. When a young, cheery, and...

I want to write a low-effort story that can just sort of pump chapters linearly without much thought. Although in order to make this work, I think the premise has to be interesting. One thing that comes to mind is to reuse the magical girl setting from the NUF polls. The basic premise of this...

I don't want to keep making new novels on the main site (especially with stories that I don't think I'll keep up with), so I feel more comfortable just posting things on the forums. Feel free to use this thread to post writing / miscellaneous stories that doesn't go anywhere else. Anyone can...

Mhm! There are definitely contradictory behaviors in real life for sure! I think the hardest element is that other characters are constantly making fun of your protagonist's looks, which makes especially difficult to deal with because there is an active bullying element with your character. As...

Self-esteem (particularly with appearance) + extroversion feels like an unusual combination that is hard to pull off! When your story, I think it felt a little mismatched because your protagonist doesn't try very hard at her appearance. It's definitely possible for very beautiful people to...

Ahhh, it didn't come out by the time I stopped reading your story. I think it's a nice theme, but I wasn't picking it up in the early chapters. There's also a risk of picking up readers who are into one thing but then you pivot your story into something else. Ohhh, I dunno! It's more of a...

@Assurbanipal_II I read the two chapters you recommended! They're intriguing flashbacks for sure, and it's interesting content that provides even another layer to Aurora. I'm not sure if it's emotional enough to my personal tastes, mostly in part because a lot of times I seek things that are...

What if you're married to someone but your relationship isn't perfect? xD

Reactions as I read: Synopsis: I like the synopsis (and crossdressing <3) and it reminds me of in-print books that I used to read. It's well written and I feel a desire to click! Though out of curiosity, how do you switch yourself out with your twin sister when it's clear the body double will...

Reactions as I read: Synopsis: Ahhhh I'm a sucker for this theme. I would probably read this on my own if I had time. Tags: Tragedy <3 Insecurities hit hard with me Chapter 1: Why is this title different from the other ones? Inconsistent tenses (I played with the ends of my hair). First...

Comments as I read: Synopsis: "God-tier" somehow elicits a negative reaction from me immediately as soon as I see it. Hmm, not sure if I'm feeling another pervert GB story, but let's read it anyways! Prologue Oh that's quite a juxtaposition for a first line. Intriguing I guess if it's...

Maybe, although it depends on the way it's designed. I think most readers tend not to interact very much. If you gave authors the ability to block certain accounts from making suggestions (i.e. got tired of too many spam suggestions), I pretty much feel like you would have all the bases covered.

I responded to the poll~ I do have a few thoughts that may or may not be helpful. 1. Regarding contracts with online publishers In Western writing communities, authors tend to dislike and distrust contracts with publishing platforms. This is much more common on Chinese sites and virtually...