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Thanks for taking the tie to review my work. 1 yeah I know, but it's sorta my style, I sometimes forget how some characters are supposed to look like and it throws off my writing when their description is spread out throughout the chapter. Besides this way, everyone knows how everyone in the...

Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. After I had posted my chapter I was finally satisfied that it was finally published but something weird happened, for whatever reason the story didn't show up in the latest update. I want to know if this was a bug or what? I'm really lost.

So, I finally finished my first chapter but I want some feedback on the quality of the chapter plus some tips on grammar mistakes that you find and any critique will be helpful https://www.scribblehub.com/read/343438-din-world/chapter/344753/

Thanks but your interpretation of the use of psychopath and the other mental disorders that you brought up doesn't work in my vision, I appreciate the input, but again feels wrong and too different from what I have researched. They are not struggling with their disorder on split personalities or...

Ugh no your letting popular media cloud your judgement, they don't act on emotions cause they don't have on the speak of, my character doesn't cry, get sad or laugh in the slightest of things they always have a blank expression on their face. Again not what a psychopath is, I never mentioned...

I painted a scenario from a rough sketch in my book of the psychopath character killing innocent civilians on the off chance that they might get their friends in trouble, not really caring about how they feel about it. Logical thought void of emotion or morals while still caring for the friends.

Thanks for this still sticking with psychopath though and they aren't a horrible person 24/7. Them being a psychopath is important for their character growth and the others character dynamic plus they will put confidence in their friends by being their chaotic selves so I'm gonna keep I'm...

Alright let me paint a scenario: the gang is outside hunting predators for sport when one of the citizens is saved by one of them the psychopath without hesitation kills victim and when questioned explains that the citizen would put them in trouble if they told people about them and so as to not...

No they are definitely a psychopath not sociopath and they don't show compassion as a way of manipulation they don't really care about manipulation out of their work. the character is just someone who has no emotions expresses care through logical means and doesn't understand people actions or...

Unless your doing something with the gender identity no, most writers here just is it as fetish fuel, nothing really special about the tag, just if you like it read/write in however way you like

Thanks for the advice, but they don't have emotions, they sorta just over think things never knowing how things effect people never really understanding what sadness or anger feels like. And this is indeed psychopathy, people always assume the less violent one is a sociopath but my character...

Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. so while editing some parts of my story something struck me, how people will perceive my psychopath character. Now the way I wrote is not the calculative emotionless husk that's dangerous... Okay they are, but most all the other MC's are. Unlike popular media...

I thought we'd talk about how absurd and fetishy the tag has become and how it could be used to explore the characters gender identity. I didn't intend for this to happen, but it's not bad though I got to see this side of people on smuthub.

Hello my guys, gals and enby pals Now I've been reading some gender bender stories where mc gets turned into a girl, when a thought came to, why don't they just transition back to being a guy or something in-between. yeah I know most of them are in a fantasy world setting, but it just feels a...

I don't really care about getting on trending or making it to homepage neither will look for stories so this doesn't bother me

Yes, in my understanding people don't go into depth with when writing smut to keep as lose as possible. Think of it like cropping bits of doujin, sure you still know sex is going on but it's not as graphic. I know but they are so vague about is or isn't allowed (save for beastiality, noncon or...

Chaotic enby on the toilet. hello, my guys, gals and enby pals. so while on the ol' John I began to ponder how graphic are the smut scenes on it web novel site. how far are permitted to go? How descriptive are the sec scenes? should I bother posting on sites like webnovel, honeyfeed or royalroad...

Yo owo truck this looks cool although most readers are used to the no-image dialogue version, this saves a lot of time, but just don't overcrowd your chapter with images otherwise you might as well draw a comic. This is still a good idea considering you make enough for each character's creation...

It's is a chapter but more of a notice for the series instead of an actual chapter so I think that still counts and someone decided to star based on that