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Thank you owotruck, I actually was looking for a natural way to turn bad guy characters to good, then sorta bad again. Not villainous like the rest of their friends. The second problem is how to redeem them in their friends eyes as trust worthy again.

Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. Okay, so I got some bad guys where some want to be good but then want to be redeemed into bad guys again and want to make their shift in character believable, but one of their friends tells them that they can't do that cause they aren't as bad as them. I also...

Wait you're all here writing less than 5k words on purpose and you feel actually good about the chapter

Listen young lady I'm busy and don't give a shit, ya wanna drink grab whatever ya want. It's your kidneys after all

Thanks this was the type of response I was looking for when I posted this, I'm sorry if the original was harder to understand. I do find weird that people keep thinking that A or B-F would kill each other that wasn't part of my thought process, neither was the act. I was more interested on what...

Thanks for the input but that still doesn't fit the character, there is no trauma or ptsd for why they're emotionless, they're just born that way. Also for F explaining things to A the reason why it won't work is because A just can't understand so they'd go a different route of trying to ease...

That was never my intention. I never wanted to do the edgy version that most people have when thinking of a psychopath, but more on the what a person would actually go through. This was less of an edgy psychopath killing people and more of the psychological effect it'll have on a person who...

Look towards Viator's comment, I wanted more like what they commented on. That's what I wanted to get from this thread.

Okay first off it ain't the same thing also what did I tell in the beginning. Also I'm not doing the media popularized version of a psychopath, I'm doing from my understanding of what the word means, also why? I don't see why my psychopath can't see their friends as important to them or not...

Interesting, you have a knack for getting to understand characters very effectively. I actually didn't want to add this, but I want to see how you'll interpret this. Same scenario and characters but A-F are heartless who've long since forgotten the value of a person's life. What will be your...

Whoa, you did it! The thing I was longing for and you, beautiful user you! Also I should've put that B is A's best friend. B would understand more than anyone else, but still feel like shit and try to boost their confidence down the line. C,B & D would mostly do as you theorized. A and F's love...

Okay, first A would never find them useless and even if they were also A is there to be closer to them their skill gap has nothing to with A's reasoning also no the A stays a psychopath. For your understanding A and the others have messed up multiple times but A never saw the use in Killing...

There's no murdering here, the psychopath doesn't kill manipulate their friends.

For simplicity pretend love doesn't need emotions, so F and A are very much in love. B-F didn't let their vulnerabilities slip, A just realized that they are all pissed at them but doesn't know why. And A does care for B-F, being emotionless doesn't give you a pass for being a dick. Okay first...

Mad scientist enby hello my guys, gals and enby pals. So, I got myself a thought experiment for you all. And for this thought experiment to go more smoothly I'm gonna need you to suspend your disbelief on psychopaths. Pretend the only thing that you know about them is that they have little to...

Hello guys, gals and enby pals While reading a few minutes ago I began to wonder why do some author's put info or world building in a random paragraph. For me I always use the anime view when writing; whatever I can show within a frame is what the reader gets, all other stuff like extra info or...

For me I love writing fluffy romance with the characters being all in love even though it's well past they're early love stage in the relationship. I feel it makes for a more realistic healthy relationship to not cause problems for the lover by the lovers, it always felt sorta stupid to me when...

As someone who looks much younger than I'm supposed to... I don't know, time has been lost on me for eons now

I cannot compete on such levels

Thanks for the feed back, Kitty I actually do use grammarly for the editing. Now I know where to make adjustments in my writing style to be more enjoyable. I was actually beginning to think that I was putting too many paragraphs or cutting the sentences too short, guess I was wrong.