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A stalker, meaning a person not likely to have any connections or close acquaintances that know where they'll be on that day? It's the perfect opportunity to re-read some long pork recipes, I suppose.

Yeah, that's from the greek fabulist. Basically, a story with a well-defined moral\objective lesson or that leaves the reader with an issue the author wants them to ponder. Although ironically, Aesop's actual stories did not contain those, the listener was supposed to sort out the meaning...

@Freesia.Cutepearl not everything on the list applies to your novel though. The "cast full of gay", "ball variety" and naivete are simply general remarks. Just a bit of clarification. This is the biggest fault I find with trans\gay aesops. Most treat the situation as somehow unique to the queer...

You did it, you mad bastard, you really did it! You got here before the whore herself! You can have a single tip of my fedora.

Well, don't make a surprised pickachu face when your divisive and controversial work is rated as divisively controversial and awarded a lone star of excellence. Rather I have a bunch of stuff I don't enjoy and that is bad for my blood pressure, so I avoid those novels. I do tend to gravitate...

@Freesia.Cutepearl Read up to chapter 11, and while the story is quite good, I absolutely hate the characters and the tropes they represent, which is my number one gripe with transgender MC stories. Your story is just not for the type of audience I'm a part of. Well, yeah, and those belong in...

I feel like your story caters to an extremely specific audience, which I'm not a part of. Rather, I quietly despise the sort of people that flock to these kinds of stories. And, since two groups don't mix well, it's better to avoid mixing them altogether, to save everyone from the headache.

@Freesia.Cutepearl Me, after reading the post and the story synopsis:

Well, that's what you usually get when you ask a stranger's opinion on the internet. That's why I never ask for it, because I'm the greatest fruitcake ever bread and muffin can change that.

The formatting is approximately horrible. It most likely contains only short dozen-word paragraphs. Not much explanation or information in between. Like trying to fish out a needle from a stack of needles. I'm only commenting on the latest chapter, btw. The flow of storytelling is also...

Isn't he, though?

She would make a nice jacket. Time to grab my vixen peeling implements, I suppose.

I AM THE CONDUCTOR OF THE POOP TRAIN!!! AND I!!! HAVE THE SHINIEST MEAT BICYCLE!