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    Strengths and Weaknesses

    Just opening up another topic for some discussion. As authors, what do you think are your greatest strengths and weaknesses? It can be anything, from your choice of words to your diligence in promoting your work. Come flex and self-depreciate all you want. I'm all ears, and I feel that it's a...
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    Do you like or dislike it when...

    Not at all for me. I think the easiest way to write characters is to make them extensions of yourself, so you can more easily answer the "what would they do?" questions when writing. Essentially, I split my overall personality into different characters. So if someone would tell me that, I won't...
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    Favorite Character Archetypes

    I love that kind of male lead, too. And I get why you said black hair. They're often black-haired. Same with the character arc. Wow, we're quite similar. It's k. No need to be embarrassed :blob_reach:
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    What are your thoughts on villainess stories?

    Not exactly my genre judging by the premise, but I don't mind. I'm not too deep on the genre so Hamefura's like my only major exposure to it. Still, I liked the show enough.
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    Favorite Character Archetypes

    That seems like a writing prompt on its own. I feel it could be a cool story.
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    Looking for specific feedback

    I think that the denser paragraphs probably need a line break or two. I can read them on PC well enough, but I would imagine them to be nightmares to read on mobile.
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    Writing How important glossary is for you?

    Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor
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    Writing How important glossary is for you?

    I don't think people typically go to it immediately, but I love the feature. Allows me to add some character sheets, profiles, and character art without needing them to intrude in the actual text in my story. Stuff like this that can be found in actual LNs but in portrait/profile form, kinda...
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    How Would You Review Your Own Story?

    I'd say that the existing reviews for the first volume on the site are on point. As is this one when I asked someone to read it over at Discord Stuff like grammar (tenses) and prose need a LOT of work, but they're understandable enough that they don't completely detract from the story. They...
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    Looking forward to it!

    Looking forward to it!
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    I made 1.1k views?! WHAT IS THIS

    You updated recently, and you have a catchy title to fish clicks. SH does a good job of helping favor the frequently-updating.
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    Favorite Character Archetypes

    That's more or less on par with what a number of people here have as their favorite character. Interesting. On the second statement... *raises hand* :sweating_profusely: I have watched a lot of anime because I got baited by waifu characters.
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    Basically my first story. Give it to me dry!!!

    That explains it, then. While my favorite part of the series is the Soul Society Arc, I would say that the early episodic Ghostbusters thing really was a very unique setting for its time. I hear that sentiment a lot from the fans, and I can see why. I also love urban fantasies with a tinge of...
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    Basically my first story. Give it to me dry!!!

    Procrastinating too because why not? Overall, I felt comfortable with the writing. However, that could be some bias because your writing actually reminds me of a bit of mine, structurally at least :blobrofl: What I liked about your writing is that it creates a decent image of the environment...
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    Cover or character illutration art

    Really reminded me of this. One of the pics. Even the attire's similar, so I thought you're a fan who used it as reference.
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    Cover or character illutration art

    For some reason, this reminded me of Saito from Hakuoki's second OP. You used it as reference? Nice to see a fellow fan if that's the case :blobthumbsup:
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    Do you write what you like to read? Or does it differ?

    Of course I write what I like to read... or play... or watch.
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    Having a hard time...

    This resonated with me on a spiritual level :sweating_profusely: Probably the number one cause of burnouts in my experience.
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    Who wants to review my stories? Short but plan to make more.

    What I meant are characters like these. Your girl reminded me of them. At least having the same vibes.
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    Who wants to review my stories? Short but plan to make more.

    Just commented directly on the one that caught my attention. Hope you'll keep writing more~
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