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Daily diary; Edited chapter one..., again. Satisfied with chapter two. Reworking chapter three. Making plans for chapter four. ... Meh, just the usual.

In your synopsis, you should feature the main points of your story. Make it interesting, but don't spoil your plot. Make sure it's presentable. Read the synopses of other stories, that would give you good examples. Well, hope I helped, and good luck with your story. UNRELATED: Read your...

It feels generic, a synopsis that could be adapted for any other novel of the same genre.

Also, intriguing....

It disappears and your total views decrease, other than that no consequence, unless you have tons of readers, then there's a possibility for backlash.

My standards are quite tame, but I'm likely to drop a book if it has; - Terrible presentation - Intelligible grammar - No transitions - Overly repetitive plot - Unrealistically stupid main character - Feels slow (despite not being slice of life.) - Flat characters - Bad dialogue - Too much...

Never noticed that, thanks, I'll proofread again with that in mind. Edit: For characterisation, I didn't want to just point out things, I wanted to leave room for interpretation, hence I didn't tell the readers everything.

The guy willing to help others in exchange for their opinions.

Could you tell me what you meant by sloppy, I need to properly understand in order to fix or avoid mistakes. Either way thanks for the feedback, that's how I learn.

Read the title, I'd appreciate the feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468387/displaced-waking-up-in-another-world/

You'll find my feedback, to your story if go to google docs. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468387/displaced-waking-up-in-another-world/ I'd appreciate if you commented on my chapters, as well.

Try release scheduling.

Inner monologues are quite common in reality, most people just refer to them as thoughts, people tend to think to themselves when they're alone, or bored.

True, but in different ways.

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Contemporary huh, needs a splice of fantasy, surrealism will forever be king.

Dracula, Carmilla, Sekhmet, Vampire stories just never seem to age.

The hero's journey is an example, there are many others, rags to riches is one such classic.