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Ok, let me finish my new chapter one (whom purpose is to flesh out The System.), before I release the rewrite.

I can find similarities between the two since at the end of the day, they are the same thing, just written differently using a different perspective. I want Andrew to be Andrew, in the published iteration she feels like some kind of bullshitery anime protagonist, 'happy go lucky retard', who...

Respect to whoever i'm quoting.

Guess today i'll be Twoface.

( I am rewriting due to dissatisfaction, don't forget that.)

got an email notifying me about this post, when i'm done with my housework(cooking), i'll give your book a read then post a thread on feedback, since that's where feedback belongs, i'll notify you when i do.

Are they fundamentally different, i mean i have to write an entire new chapter featuring the system that preludes what is currently my first chapter, really have to flesh it out, currently my readers think the system is like those systems you find in most litrpgs, yeah, don't want to depict it...

When the people of the future read my work, they will say, "the author was a byproduct of his time."

Some of us wrote as we went, then reread our work, and realized it was terrible, few place the book in the trash, others rework it to make it match their standards.

The current depictions of my character(The System) isn't head cannon, and my other character(Andrew) isn't fleshed out properly, the problem is, i the author find it difficult to consume my own story, the way it flows, the inconsistencies, the plot, they disturb me. Only recently have i drawn...

I've been rewriting the early chapters of my stories so that it'd better suit my vision, especially one of my central characters, the problem is its different to conflict with the original, so should i release them as a new story or just re-release the chapters. Here's the link to my story

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Well, in this case you're disturbing your own sleep, a lot of terrible of things has happened, is happening or will happen, human history said to me, 'don't let the actions of strangers disturb your peace.' If you really care, hold yourself to your standards, don't commit what you consider...

Knowing that the age of consent varies across countries, and also finding it difficult to care about people or things i've never met or spoken to in person before, i'll say i don't give a damn, the soldiers from different armies believe themselves to be the good guys and the other side the...

Didn't say nothing about being transfriendly, only said not all gb with the phycological tag deals with the issues of transgenders.

Not every gb story delving into psychology is about the issues of transgenders, for example, the curses type, guy that pisses off who he shouldn't is genderbended out of spite, what I'm saying is just because a character has been gender bended doesn't mean the character wanted to be gender...

if Borohine is weak then how did they manage to make a society reliant on slaves?

@Florestea no problem, though not a fan of fanfiction myself, nonetheless it was interesting, first time I ever saw that kind of style.

thanks, and I read your chapter, specifically chapter 41, it's a mesh of first-person and third-person, I recommend making the latter dominant, as it is reading your chapter was like reading a script for one of those play's I used to partake in back in high school/primary school, the lack of...