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How do you do it without getting stuck? Is it a draft? Because I'm always struggling at a particular scene because I spent too much time thinking about the logic behind.

Yup. I had many fight scenes. Martial arts, magic, supernatural powers, you name it. All the more troublesome when it's in a 1st person POV. These are the scenes I used to wrote back in the days. It's a draft now. (MC) Many vs 1: When I came to, I realised that the girl turned her gaze to me...

Definitely 1st POV. Because it felt like I was diving into the story.

Wow, ain't you a greedy one. But first of all, DID YOU READ? I'm never a fan to be reading a rape scene right from the start. I was wondering whether you are feigning ignorance or simply don't care. Or even think that this is just a convenient place just for you. Nevertheless, I suppose I...

Well, I'm not sure whether I'm considered as a new author, but I had been writing the same book for almost 8 years as a hobby. At the beginning of my journey I used to do that for fun. I watch animes, read mangas, and one day something just struck onto me out of the blue. Why not I create...

Oh, another first timer. Hmm... your synopsis has a very strong atmospheric tone, a clear mythic/fantastical foundation, and a sense of cosmic stakes, which is great. You’re clearly aiming for something philosophical, intense, and dark, potentially in the dark fantasy, wuxia/xianxia, or...

I understand that this is your first time writing and you had an excitement and passion to continue as readers commented your work. However, I feel like there's a need to stop you before this thing harms more victims. So, let's begin with your blurb (sort of, you do know what is a blurb...

I checked your work, and surprisingly, your blurb is inside your synopsis. First off, do you know what is the difference between blurb and synopsis? Blurb is a short, enticing teaser written to hook the reader and sell the book. Example: Nina, a young priestess, thought her pilgrimage would...

Then it's at most a draft if you plan to re-edit. Anyways, let's start with your synopsis: Congratulations, it's the first time an author finally nails a synopsis. However, what you have at most is the structure of the synopsis. I had no idea what you are trying to show. 1. Vague Language and...

Fortunately for you, gender bender tags would depends on how the author brings it out. You are lucky, because I dislike 90% of the gender bender genres, which, Your Name falls perfectly into that, and yet I like that movie. Moving on. Firstly, here comes your synopsis: I will forgive you since...

Ahhh, that. My bad, but I was going to write most of them in the synopsis. For that, let's say you woke up at 3am in the morning trying to rush into your friend's place who's in a critical state. I mean, all you had in your brain is to worry about your friend. Who would've thought that your...

Does rewriting a work counts as new? Ignore the synopsis, I'm still working on it, and just read the first two chapters, please~ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

So, Representing_Tromba, are you here to test me? Your silence to silently post your new work here is choking me. You are basically a veteran like me-- how shameless of you. Did you lost your confidence after writing so many stories and lost your way? You even had a work that's selling on...

Oh hey, CharlesEBrown, you are also quite active in the forum, almost the same as Rookieqw. I saw you liking almost every reply in this forum. Oh gee, what's surprising is that I found a related series to this book. 1. Diamond in the Rough (Prequel) 2. Strange Awakening (Shared Universe)...

Nah I won't hurt your feelings. So first off, your synopsis, the summary of your story: Again, this isn't the first time I've seen authors who doesn't know how to write a synopsis. It's quite surprising that the number of authors who doesn't know how to write a synopsis is quite unexpected...

What the, you aren't even in scribblehub. Should I read the prologue? I guess I will skip it. Is your title <Overcome>? I saw you liking almost every reply Rookie.

Hello all. The madman here. I'm a writer that constantly gets into a bottleneck during writing. So once in a while I would pop into ScribbleHub forum and start choosing post randomly while giving criticism. I noticed there are many works that got taken by aliens before I get to criticise...

Since you screamed pity and was so desperate to get a feedback, so I will grant you your wish. Putting aside all similarities it had to do with the other works, I will be criticising based on your work alone, and not others. Hmm, since I'm on a feedback spree again, I guess I would have to put...

Hey there, after seeing that sad looking reply after one day and twelve minutes from your post, I'm here to bash your face and ego, like literally. So here's what every fresh starter is going to have this idea: I write because I think you have ideas, but I write simply because I want to write...

So... let's start with the synopsis. I wondered why, but you started with something like a quote. There’s a vagueness in the wording that may makes it hard to grasp. You can convey the sense of an overwhelming presence of the unknown without repeating the idea of “something I don’t know”...