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Sometimes I wished I could plant mini bombs into your food disguised as a corn. I enjoyed caving your skull in with my fist while smiling like a sadist. Ramming bike drivers when they are blocking my way and hope they'd disappear forever. Hmm, perhaps I was born evil and suppressing my inner...

When you woke up from a dream and thought: 'Holy crap this is going to be sick' When you shit in the toilet and suddenly had an inspiration When you read manga and watch anime you suddenly had this spark When you read people's story you thought maybe I could try this When you were fed up with...

Third attempt. I'm ordering a deep fry. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I think I only hit characters, humor, immersive worldbuilding, romance. There's no harem in my work. Just finish rewriting and scheduling updates. Feel free to have a look. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Wanted to prove I'm still alive.

Link expired. Let me join. But I won't be active most of the time because I had work to do.

Hello, the madman here. Went silent for a few months and now I pop back, always bringing back a better quality of my story. I always find myself having a hard time to fish your eyeballs. I noticed a few things whenever a new author pops up and they needed feedback. Readers in SH always...

Decided to pick up my pen again.

Hey, I always give honest critique. Because I can't stand those who gave superficial ones. Anyways, let's go to your synopsis. 1. Lack of Clarity and Overuse of Abstract Language: "It’s all too vague." The synopsis leans heavily on philosophical language and abstract ideas without clearly...

Burnout years ago. Made lots of notes and decided to put them aside. Would sometimes check on them and see whether I could use it in my work.

In my story, I had: 1. Magic - or magic spells, a supernatural power to bend the laws of nature. Through consuming a form of energy called mana. There are three methods to activate. i. Chants. (Creation. Had a specific language that brings out the most mana conversion rate to output) ii...

Crap, this didn't work well huh. Thank you for your review. I will continue to polish my work.

Good timezone to you as well. You offer sincere judgement. I'm really interested to have your critiques. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Good luck to you. Sorry can't made it past the first though.

Because I was shown of this instead of synopsis.

I was wondering why I was shown with the statistics right off the bat, perhaps it was to scare me. Unfortunately, it's not working. It doesn't stop me from criticising you. So from your synopsis: Okay... your synopsis is very strong for your target genre. However, there are things you could...

Chill, bro. Relax. Although I sort of missed you out, but I've got you, so relax, okay? Stop posting anymore to ask for feedbacks, man. {roasting an action novel], [So how many of us really want constructive criticism on whatever we're working on]. You reallyyyyy need to work on your patience...

Not sure if you remember, but I gave you a feedback on 11th February 2025 when you posted on [Just a little feedback would be nice, thank you}. I can see you made changes afterwards, and posted again on [Honest Feedback would be nice, thx}, just to be completely ignored. Now that you are here...