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  1. LuciferVermillion

    As an author, how do you feel when writing villains who commit crimes or immoral acts?

    Sometimes I wished I could plant mini bombs into your food disguised as a corn. I enjoyed caving your skull in with my fist while smiling like a sadist. Ramming bike drivers when they are blocking my way and hope they'd disappear forever. Hmm, perhaps I was born evil and suppressing my inner...
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    And you are green tea.

    And you are green tea.
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    Writing How do you appreciate your own work?

    When you woke up from a dream and thought: 'Holy crap this is going to be sick' When you shit in the toilet and suddenly had an inspiration When you read manga and watch anime you suddenly had this spark When you read people's story you thought maybe I could try this When you were fed up with...
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    I was never alive to begin with.

    I was never alive to begin with.
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Third attempt. I'm ordering a deep fry. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/
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    Recommendations Recommend me some SH books to read! (Round 2)

    I think I only hit characters, humor, immersive worldbuilding, romance. There's no harem in my work. Just finish rewriting and scheduling updates. Feel free to have a look. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/
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    Collab? (2nd post)

    Link expired. Let me join. But I won't be active most of the time because I had work to do.
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    What hooks you to read a webnovel and why?

    Hello, the madman here. Went silent for a few months and now I pop back, always bringing back a better quality of my story. I always find myself having a hard time to fish your eyeballs. I noticed a few things whenever a new author pops up and they needed feedback. Readers in SH always...
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Hey, I always give honest critique. Because I can't stand those who gave superficial ones. Anyways, let's go to your synopsis. 1. Lack of Clarity and Overuse of Abstract Language: "It’s all too vague." The synopsis leans heavily on philosophical language and abstract ideas without clearly...
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    Creative burnout and story hyperfixation

    Burnout years ago. Made lots of notes and decided to put them aside. Would sometimes check on them and see whether I could use it in my work.
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    So i am obsessed with science and fantasy so i had this idea to mix them to best of my knowledge

    In my story, I had: 1. Magic - or magic spells, a supernatural power to bend the laws of nature. Through consuming a form of energy called mana. There are three methods to activate. i. Chants. (Creation. Had a specific language that brings out the most mana conversion rate to output) ii...
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    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    Crap, this didn't work well huh. Thank you for your review. I will continue to polish my work.
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    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    Good timezone to you as well. You offer sincere judgement. I'm really interested to have your critiques. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/
  14. LuciferVermillion

    A reading challenge to other authors (up to chapter 6): exchange of ideas.

    Good luck to you. Sorry can't made it past the first though.
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Because I was shown of this instead of synopsis.
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    I was wondering why I was shown with the statistics right off the bat, perhaps it was to scare me. Unfortunately, it's not working. It doesn't stop me from criticising you. So from your synopsis: Okay... your synopsis is very strong for your target genre. However, there are things you could...
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Chill, bro. Relax. Although I sort of missed you out, but I've got you, so relax, okay? Stop posting anymore to ask for feedbacks, man. {roasting an action novel], [So how many of us really want constructive criticism on whatever we're working on]. You reallyyyyy need to work on your patience...
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    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Not sure if you remember, but I gave you a feedback on 11th February 2025 when you posted on [Just a little feedback would be nice, thank you}. I can see you made changes afterwards, and posted again on [Honest Feedback would be nice, thx}, just to be completely ignored. Now that you are here...
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