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I do number 3

I think that's original. Also for me it goes; First person: very restrictive Second person: Literally forced insert Third person: Extremely flexible and can be mixed with first or second.

Just went and tried second person for the first time.

For me? I compare them to the joker and try to balance using bane.

You dare challenge me?! I'll show you. Breathe chap. You ain't gonna get hurt, just hit him harder. Now show him what ya got in the ring! No ya fool! Don't stay and take a punch in the face. Dodge! Dodge! Dodge! Now give him an uppercut. Yes! Just like that. Stay calm, stay calm, he's still...

If it doesn't work the first time, try and try again. If it doesn't work the second time, there are other sites to try. I was presented with barney as a kid.

I don't like the user interface of writing.com, we're no longer in the nineties.

Respectable.

For those like me who've ever written in third person, let's see who's bold enough to try first person. As customs dictate; I die first. There were too many people on the bus today, I've never been one to be fond of crowds, but I guess today is one of those days. That man, the guy wearing white...

Consider me weird but I like criticism though I'll ignore it if it's very, very mean, with little to no substance.

If you went to my profile and compared Anima Aliena and a strange soul, you'd realize there was a resurrection.

I spent a lot of practice on word flow, it seems to have worked too well. Also, thank you for the feedback, it means a lot.

Most of your dislikes were explored in an argument between the main core and thread seven, also a lot of what I did in this story wouldn't have worked as well in third person. The reason I chose third person was the versatility.

Not always.

Basically, yeah, I write for myself so numbers mean less, feedback and reader interactions is valued more.

Anybody else give one site more love over the other, like I mean giving the chapters you post elsewhere more attention because of the majority of your actual readers being there. Also, lack of feedback over here, so care less.

Some people seek validation, others want to hear their readers voice, most leave because of demotivation. I once left, I came back and can't stop because my story won't leave me alone.

Mind giving mine a look, I was desperate enough to ask Sailusgeibel for feedback, so I'd really appreciate it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468387/anima-aliena/