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Alright then, keep your secrets.

The z The solution of the superman problem is as followed; Focus on the other aspects, not just strength but mind, relations, mysteries and problem solving.

Thank you for the explanation. Now what did you mean by 'cerebral'. Consider as someone that was born in the old times, not too long ago.

I know the statistics, but you know what the psychology tag is also focused on good characterisation. Anima Aliena has that tag, the pacing is also day by day, would it be considered as slice of life? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/468387/anima-aliena/ (Posted the link in case anyone's...

If that's the case then it'd conflict with action-adventure and high-fantasy.

Well, that just sounds boring, I don't do boring, I can't stomach it.

I'm slightly curious, what makes slice of life what it is? Would a story whose pace moves day by day be qualified as slice of life? My high fantasy has me asking questions.

They said its cursed, they lied.

The story didn't give me a choice, I wrote myself into a corner, so I reimagined everything. Anima Aliena is performing far better than a strange soul.

Finally released that chapter.

I can't remember.

Romance mixed with gb really is a curse. Disclaimer: I dislike romance novels due to having been force fed those H movies.

That's dark but don't treat yourself too harshly.

I'm annoyed but I agree.

Disclaimer: I find fun in doing what I hate. 1.Not being required to have the plot, characters, themes and scenery revolve around it. 2. Well if I'm being honest, spite. Yes I'm writing out of spite because a book whose name I can't remember was so terrible and mentally insulting that I told...

Having to start a chapter over bc you forgot what you were writing. Just another day in my life.

Or more accurately the male leads face-slapping everyone under the sun just so they can ntr like two bunnies in a burrow.

My writing style and method which analyzes and covers every angle takes a bit of time, using it I take about three hours to write six hundred words and I haven't even mentioned proofreading and editing which I do myself. Most words I've ever written in a day using that style, one thousand five...

Honest Feedback No build up to the major moment, lack of tone, no reason to be attached to characters we've just met. Word flow needs some work, there's sudden transitions. Lack of hook to capture your reader. I don't do opinions when giving reviews since I often read what I rather not so...