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Without knowing what Rin did, I have to trust Jennifer about the scale of his crimes and good deeds. So her reasoning might be skewed, but it's not outright wrong. I'm missing what is Jennifer's stake in this though. Is she just a self-proclaimed judge? Does she wage a personal revenge aginst Rin?

Technically, can ancient ancestor even be considered an incest? By now, the blood relation would be so diluted, it would practically be a relation only on paper..

Depends on the context, but in general, it's a no for me.

Not a fan myself, but to each their own. As long as they're not going to have childern, because then it's a genetic red flag

They want it to sound BIG and POWERFUL, which is an obsession for the Chinese in particular from my experience, and maybe it sounds alright in the original language, but the actual meaning/translation is... Chuunibyou.

Because it's from French, enough said :blob_cookie:

Maybe, maybe not. Deffinitely not full-time though.

Yeah, this site is officially for 18+, or 13+ with guardian assistancce. Childern's Fiction is not going to see much popularity here, I'm afraid. Terms of Service

I would say in general, it's nice when the author considers reader's ideas and maybe implements parts of them that fit in some form or another, but going too far to please some readers can easily backfire by turning away other readers, as you're now writing something they did not want, something...

Machine translation. After you try it, you will suddenly feel that many novels you though had bad quality before, might not be so bad after all.

Reminds me of that one novel I have seen, that was written in something only remotely resembling the English language. Now that was an instant one-star, with accompanying rewiev. It was long since deleted as well.

Now I would deffinitely give that a try, though it's a shame they would have to ditch their trains.

As long as you are clear about writing a fictional cult offshoot, I believe you should not have any real issue with mentioning ties to real religions as its origins. As mentioned above, things mostly get hairy when you write about the existing branches of real religions, extremists in particular.

What did you win?

<Assumption>Because they put as much effort into the summary, as they put into the rest of the novel.</Assumption> <Conclusion>It's good they write the synopsis like that, as it serves to warn you of the novel's quality before you delve into it and burn yourself</Conclusion>

If she is truly determined to leave everything behind to see her brother, she won't return. Not unless she learns that promise is not going to happen, or unless she finds something that would convince her to return, even if it means throwing away the chance to see her brother return to life...

Aforemetioned Harry Potter has about a million words over seven books, giving it an average of about 140k per book. Game of Thrones goes at 300-400k words per book, currently at 1,7 million total over five books, with at least two more planned. You might want to start thinking about splitting...

Where is the line between simple programming and actual belief? Only after marriage.

Without knowing your story or MC, I would pair Dark with Ice most likely. Yin also seems to be associated with earth, besides cold and dark, so there's that as a natural option. If I was going for the contrast, I would choose Fire or Light.

Greet them casually and briefly. No introductions needed, act as if you know each other. Avoid using names, at all costs. Occupy a strategic corner with plentiful food or drinks within reach as soon as possible, and hold it with your life. Do not let yourself be pushed out. Throw bones or other...