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    Recommendations Please recommend hshsgs

    Honestly, I'm just writing a story about one. Just the first chapter is out though - and you will need a bit of patience to get some action, cause well, he is lazy.
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    Editing What is the best way to write a good synopsis?

    Yes! I think that is a good template. You have to try to recognize which type of person will be interested in your story, and then proceed to explain to those specific people why your book is good. This is a good approach. Haha, fair.
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    Your thoughts about SH?

    I think getting published and read is a very difficult task on the internet. A place like ScribbleHub can at least get you read, and get some reactions from a prospective reader. As far as the content here goes - I hope to improve it! And get some other people to come check out the site. I...
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    Editing What is the best way to write a good synopsis?

    The synopsis is important - it's the second thing the reader is going to look at. Now, a synopsis in a book is easy to write - you can summarize the main plot line, and leave the reader with some breadcrumbs towards where the rest of it is heading. But how do I do that in SH? What are the...
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    Thank you so much!

    Thank you so much!
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    TvTropes is amazing. Somehow my completely orignal hero who i aspired to make without any tropes had a tv trope page which describes him to a extent.

    Tropes themselves are not bad. For example, every distressed hero who can't make a decision has something to do with Hamlet. Lion King is basically Hamlet retold through animals. As far as originality is concerned, such works are few and far between. All vampires these days derive from...
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    Hello, I'm new. If you have about 15 minutes, please take a look at this new concept novel I'm...

    Hello, I'm new. If you have about 15 minutes, please take a look at this new concept novel I'm writing at the moment! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/252328/the-laidback-undeath-of-edgar-crow/
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    Dream sequences.

    Extend it. Tell us about why the dream is unnerving or otherwise for the character. Show us how the character reacts. Does the character realize this is a dream? Can they manipulate it? What sort of thoughts will the character have after it wakes up?
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    Characters

    There is no easy way of writing a "life-like" character. I guess character sheets are good. They remind you of important things, like what sort of belief they have, what their natural orientation is (e.g. Chaotic Good vs Neutral Evil). But in essence a character that you will create will not be...
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    Dream sequences.

    I wouldn't do it. Just shift the dream into a chapter. The simple reason is not having the flexibility to emphasize in the passage. How would you do this? I feel it stands out for worse. Perhaps if within a chapter. Most authors just don't bother. An example would be from "The Unbearable...
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    To MxF harem writers, what type of girls do you have in your harem?

    I haven't written anything in MxF yet, but that's how I would make them up. I'd much rather go the inspiration route.
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    How realistic does a zombie apocalypse or post apocalyptic story has to be?

    I would like to go back to the original question and answer : None whatsoever. Just put a spin on it. Zombies in a spaceship? Zombies in a horrifying music festival that turns into a Battle Royal? Just think about what sort of story you want around the Zombies. Or perhaps you want to broker...
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    To MxF harem writers, what type of girls do you have in your harem?

    Honestly, just go to tvtropes and check out a harem anime or light novel cast. You'll find plenty of stock to get ideas. If you want to get ahem actual fully realized characters, try to draw inspiration from real humans? Mix and match. A highly driven, workaholic succubus, anyone? A shy and...
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    Hello! New here but have a story I would like feedback on!

    I did read a bit of your first chapter. And, I have to say, it is difficult to follow. Kids usually want simpler story lines and simpler language. There are a few key things to remember while writing any story. Show not tell. This is telling me that Sunny is a rabbit, and she knows Ralph...
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