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  1. JayDirex

    why does the published chapter look different from the how I edited it?

    when you're copying and pasting from one writing software to the next the format can change. here's suggestion. when you're ready to paste it into scribble hub don't. first, copy your document from word and then paste it into grammarly.com, do a quick edit and then copy from grammarly into...
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    If someone fell in love with you, why did they like you?

    I can answer all those questions with two words. I WRITE Creative, funny...avg looking. But I can write stories about the party, about adventurers. probably music too, if I tried. That's the one thing I bring to the table. Honey would fall in love with me because I'm competent and kind, and I...
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    How to describe/provide information

    Description in Motion The purpose of description is to set your characters in an environment that the reader can visualize. And my rule is to say typically two things about the environment to ground the reader. And you write this description as THE MC IS INTERACTING with the world: it's...
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    Writing Fight Scenes

    This is beautiful what you wrote because I keep planning on writing a how-to on fight progression. and to add to your point I also wanted to touch on the three basic level of fighters your hero will face. 1. Lowly guards, henchmen. (Threats). they are easily defeated one on one or four at a...
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    Can't recall a term (field of law) [Resolved]

    Power of Attorney
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    Writing Fight Scenes

    cliche, unless he picks up another UNLIKELY weapon. (Rock, stick, PENCIL, rolled up newspaper, chair). Makes the scene way more interesting.
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    Writing Fight Scenes

    He has the Spatial Vending Machine story ^_^ (ish cute) @Assurbanipal_II @LifeContinuesOn and, oh man. VENDING MACHINE FIGHT IN THE DUNGEON. I am sooo there. That means he has the ability to: Propel objects out of its various orifices hurl objects use it's body weight to become a monolith...
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    Writing Fight Scenes

    This is going to force me to write a "how to write a clean, progressive fight scene." In the meantime you can DM me @LifeContinuesOn Here is a Clean sword fight scene: Angel formed a glimmering broad-sword and sliced down at the knight. The warrior stopped hurling fire to dodge the blow (he's...
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    Tell me you're tired/depressed without saying you're tired/depressed

    I posted my latest chapter on December 24th. Two days later it barely has 27 views. :blob_hug: :blob_ghost:
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    Types and Styles of Isekai 2.0

    Dynamic-Isekai: you described my story to T. Good job, good analysis.
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    Looking for a school name related to kings or monarch(you get the idea)

    just the word Academy is enough for me to click it ?
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    Writing How many words in a chapter?

    Not every chapter needs rising/action climax. Even action stories have to have down time for exposition, character dev, sex scenes, etc What every chapter needs is a goal, or Aim as you put it. Part of that goal is moving the plot forward via the scenes.
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    Writing How many words in a chapter?

    1500 to 2500 is the magic number you seek. If you're going to do less than 1500 you need to post more, twice a week. If you're going to write more then 2500 then you can space chapters out by a week a part, since you're providing a healthy enough chapter. 2500 words should be at least three...
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    Editing How Do You Edit?

    looking at it in different mediums helps as well. after you write your chapter on your computer or laptop, you should keep a copy of your new chapter in your phone and then read it that way as well. by changing the media you change the way the eye reads the chapter, and you catch everything...
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    Writing How would you describe your writing style?

    minimalist- third person limited/omni. I've been told that I need to have characters reflecting more but that's bullshit. They reflect they, joke they're interesting, and have motives. They just don't go into full on monologues every chapter. the things my characters do and say, and the little...
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    Writing Can't think of anything

    it sounds like you need a prompt: "Demon loli versus the system." or how about this one: "Scribbler gets sucked into one of his own stories as the villain.. But then rewrites the story as he goes, because the villain dies in his original story" something fun like that :blob_reach:
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    Gangster's Gamble Artwork

    Yeah, when I was a noob writer I let all of that slang go. now I don't let the characters talk like that. and your "regioning" is spot on :) I'm from the Bronx and have lived in Jersey. @The_Long_Serpent "I love how nobody noticed the boss' suit" Even to this day I still write those little...
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    Gangster's Gamble Artwork

    So I was organizing Art work and found this 2014 BAD TARA MANGA I wrote, (a touch #yuri) and had artist Mei illustrate it -_- almost 7 years later, I STILL WRITE THIS TYPE OF STUFF! :blob_reach: :LOL: @Assurbanipal_II
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    Love is war

    I've actually used villain and hero "catch feelings" for each other in my story lines because I'm a huge fan of Mayadere trope: A mayadere (まやデレ) type refers to a character who is often a dangerous antagonist of a series, but switches sides after falling in love with another character. Think...
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