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I'd be pretty happy to get some feedback on the beginning of my novel. This probably won't be the final product, so feedback is very much appreciated. The kicks that had been raining down on him just moments ago began to fade. The screams of the men grew muffled, but their faces burned...

This is the beginning of my novel, I just wanna know if it's readable at all. The kicks that had been raining down on him just moments ago began to fade. The screams of the men grew muffled, but their faces burned themselves into Levin’s eyes. When he opened his eyes again, he saw nothing...