We all got threads for vampires, dragons and what not. Now it’s my turn to self indulge.
1- MiG-25
2- YF-23
3- F-15
4- J35 the based Swedish one not the cringe Chinese one
5- Me-262
Ya’ll really grasping straws right now but I’ll play along.
1. Stellagosa - WoW
2. Alexstraza - WoW
3. Ysera- WoW
4. The blue dragon from Book Eater novel/manwha
5. Any other dragon that takes the appearance of an attractive woman
1. Marida Cruz from Gundam Unicorn
2. The glasses girl from nekomonogatri
3. The snake girl from monster musume
4. Ayakashi triangle mc
5. Any anime woman who can beat me up
My only student loans right now is a low interest government loan. I could pay it off, but there’s no point if I can invest that money into things with returns greater than the interest.
I think description in first person stories is still important. You expect to see less but I have a hard time continuing reading when I just don't get anything at all
Better late than never I guess.
Descriptions are good. Good word choice. Varied sentence lengths. The actual writing is pretty solid imo but the first chapter lacks any real hook. You're gonna lose most readers at the first paragraph so it's important to give them a reason to keep reading...
Been reading more scribblehub stories lately. Don't get far into most. Notice a big chapter 1 problem is people just not describing the mc or pov character or describing them far too late.