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I liked that story at first. But eventually like many Chinese novels it gets to be a bit cyclic on its plot.

#2: Murder. #5: Possible murder; definitely theft and destruction of property. #4: Theft; possible murder. #1: Theft. #3: None issue, take your ass whoppin' cause you got caught; while everyone snickers about it.

Simplistic is better and more concise, too wordy and you lose people. So #2. However your first one has less overall mistakes. Like Safire instead of sapphire. Or the separation in paragraphs in the first one to make it easier for the eyes to read. But more information on the MC's inner thoughts...

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My Opinion and its is of course just My Opinion. Super Strong: Life can be a bit easier to work through for you than a normal person. Sports becomes an option for riches. You would become the Highest Paid Center or defensive tackle on an American National Football team. Rugby you are either...

Invulnerable to aging. That shit sucks.

Wait! Where is the "ARA ARA!" Dragon choice???

For Survival, Group is usually the best recourse. For a No civilization and basic sword & magic fantasy. This means if you sprain your ankle you will have no recourse but to injure it further to survive under normal circumstances. A quote that is attributed as something Archeologist Margret...

Eldritch makes some good suggestions. My points are on a slightly different tangent. Breaking the perps wrist over a grope is an aggravated assault charge or similar depending on country. You are allowed to stop someone from committing an illegal act, but you have to use appropriate levels of...

If you were to do anything with your future knowledge, the best bet in my not so great opinion. Would be to use it to avoid the worst problems of certain eras. Go to Trondheim before the black death starts rolling, cold as F*** but you should have a better chance to live. The Great Depression...

I will tell myself it gets better, but you need to Invest in XYZ ASAP!

To make matters more confusing, measuring instruments can differ between people not just nations, and during certain periods did indeed differ depending on where he was trained. One builders Rod/Stave can differ from another's by mere millimeters and knowledge of a Builders Measuring devices...

I do not think it actually matters as long as you are consistent. The only time measurements have thrown me off are when more than one are used, such as "The canebrake was all of 4.5ft (1.37M) away, just out of reach of the intrepid heroine". It just looks wrong to me for the flow of the story...

Funny enough I used to love Hawaiian Pizza (Pineapple & Ham) when I was a kid. But now days I am Meh over it, I will eat it, but a Meat Lovers is more my preference.

By the way there was a comic, that had the spirit of a Confederate general inhabiting it; It was General Stuart and he was the ghost of a Stuart tank of course. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haunted_Tank

Yes, reincarnate as a tank like the bob Semple tank or better the Little Willie. Then slowly as you survive and grow in story line you get to be a better Tank.

I probably write anywhere from 1,000 to 50,000 words a week normally. Just had time off recently, so really maybe only 500. Of course NONE of this is writing stories . But you asked and did not specify only authors of stories. :cool: