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  1. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Third Person Or First Person

    If you want your story to focus on the reactions of one character, do first person. If you want your story to feature how characters react to each other, do third person. Please don't do second person.
  2. Anon_Y_Mousse

    An unbeatable game

    Not at all, I'd like to see how you do it.
  3. Anon_Y_Mousse

    An unbeatable game

    meh, I think with infinite memory you should have the mental capacity to do what I suggested, even if not, there was that one story about the super computer that created it's own universe before it's death, upload your brain to one, perhaps?To your second question, yes, you will have gone...
  4. Anon_Y_Mousse

    An unbeatable game

    Create your own universe within your head, with blackjack and hookers. With all that capacity to remember every single little detail about the entire universe and everything that it has and will ever be, won't it be simply possible to create your own 'paradise' inside your head? With all the...
  5. Anon_Y_Mousse

    What do Unique Skills mean to you?

    That term isn't bad persay... But it only fits to the LitRPG genre tbh. TrueSoul is actually the very concept of someone(at least how I coined the term),if they manage to hold it together, even if their soul is scattered they will still remain since their "concept" still exists within that...
  6. Anon_Y_Mousse

    What do Unique Skills mean to you?

    I just wanted to sound edgy. Anyways, sorry cause most of my drafts aren't LitRPG and the only one that isn't is a semi-realistic VR slice-of-life. I would call what you described a "TrueSoul" or a "Conceptual law". Or... super-duper powerful ultra ultimate skills.
  7. Anon_Y_Mousse

    What do Unique Skills mean to you?

    Unique skill is just another "tier" of skills to make them look more powerful, nothing more, nothing less. Oooo I'm putting that one into my quotes doc.
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    Yet another proofreading question.

    If you've proofread it so many times, perhaps the comment found something wrong/weird about your writing style?
  9. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    Ah, I see that name was misleading. The weapons do seem kinda generic but it's expected of a mass-produced weapon.
  10. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    Light guns... So a laser blaster? Also... Terran Union huh... “Humanity has awoken, and now the galaxy will see its might." Isn't that like... A speargun? Those things you use for fishing.
  11. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    That's why everything is big in a Xianxia world, they're compensating for something. Why do you think demonic sects are desperate enough to kidnap woman for their dual cultivation?
  12. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    Haha, that's fine, I made up the golden spoon on the spot too. I read Xianxia novels so we may have veeery different definitions of a "moderately" sized dragon.
  13. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing Romance subplots and why I'd never write them

    Dense protagonists shouldn't exist imo... At least on the level of JP harem MCs. As for the rest of your essay I don't read enough romance novels to agree or disagree.
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    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    I see, that works too. Had a friend bring a cudgel to school once and boy does that thing hurt.
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    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    As soon as I saw the weapon I was like 'is that an Igorot headhunting ax?', then I saw your inspirations lol. Honestly, looks good for something crafted in a rundown workshop. The spikes look like they might get stuck in the enemy though. So is the cudgel like a bluffing thing? Like the MC...
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    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    Aw shit WH40K, I always hear about it but I actually know jack shit about it. Why purple ork though? green is best :(. Anyways, love how the ork tries to be stealthy... with a shotgun... oh well, gotta love it when the enemy hears a loud bang followed by confusion as to why the heck the bright...
  17. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Looking for Work I Can Make You A Simple Cover Art For Free

    People would appreciate if you could provide examples here so they'll know your general art style. Edit: fuck it, give me your shot at a maid wielding a greatsword(No, don't just draw Noelle)
  18. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Is writing 100k words hard?

    Yeah, it's pretty hard as long as you actually put some thought into it and didn't just slam your keyboard until you reached 100k words. So much could happen in 100k words, you can ruin an entirely good idea in that amount of words if you're not careful. So, yeah, good job!
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    Post your weapon and I'll tell you what I think of it from my weapon enthusiast perspective

    Alright, so I saw a thread like this on female, male and even non-human characters, so let's give some love to our inanimate(perhaps) weapons. So post weapons from your stories here! It can range from anywhere from John Wick's pencil to a planet destroying mega laser-beam, as long as it has...
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    Writing Prompt Japan Summons. No, wait. It’s the whole world!

    Interesting idea.. but the only way a "whole world summons" is gonna work is a Xianxia sized world where the planet is like 10x the size of the sun. Unless you mean the whole of earth will get summoned to a new world with fresh resources... Then that shit is gonna get real political.
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