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I agree with a fan... as a teenager, you tend to care about Naruto's idealism. But as an adult, you tend to understand Pain's realism. In the real world, the realities of geopolitics, nations, and war more closely follow Pain's logic, especially regarding the deterrent effect.

Well, this is just a personal opinion, but it's quite sad to see fiction that prioritizes quality narrative and content being neglected compared to cliché fiction with a thousand template titles.

Multiple POV vs. Single POV Which fiction do you prefer to read as a reader? Which fiction do you prefer to write as an author?

Well, you have an artistic vision with integrity. You're an author worthy of respect. :blob_salute:

Your multiple POV approach is similar to my fiction. My fiction also has multiple POVs from various characters, each representing different symbolism: Marry El Rose, first FMC, is a single mother who represents love, sacrifice, and protection of family and victims, her symbol is the blood rose...

I'll ignore your chapter excerpt. Analyzing prose is one of the most difficult challenges in fiction writing. Because you're not just analyzing the story, you're analyzing the medium of the story, which consists of symbols (language) that interconnect to form a complete meaning (coherence)...

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If possible, you can read Captain Reynard chapter in this feedback request thread and provide a feedback. Thank you. https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/feedback-for-handling-sensitive-content.27304/

I agree with other respondents that your narrator over-explains the characters' thoughts and feelings. In an amnesia scene, your scene will feel more immersive if you show the character's amnesia through body language, ambiguous dialogue, physiological reactions (such as anxiety when...

That's a huge number of respondents. The most I've ever gotten for a chapter was ~30 respondents in as many months, for a simple question, "Do you like this chapter?"

Well, you're right. But I also believe every author starts as a caring reader.

In theory, that's true. But I'd love to hear what other readers think, dude. I've seen web novels with giant paragraphs that take up an entire mobile screen, and surprisingly, some readers actively comment.

It's a cliché, but it's quite effective in engaging the reader's emotions. Personally, I'd prioritize seeking out novels with a down-to-earth background and personal stakes—at least based on my reading experience.

As a light novel writer, I agree that 3-5 sentences is the limit for a paragraph. But, I suspect readers of Western novels might be a bit uneasy, as they might prefer longer paragraphs. However, for TikTok readers, 3-5 sentences per paragraph seems excessive and tiring (well, I'll tell my...

Add personal stakes and a down-to-earth background to make your readers care. For example, your protagonist is a poor, loving older sibling with a seriously ill younger sister who needs intensive care. Your protagonist struggles fighting to earn money to pay for her medical expenses. It will...

Attention Span Tolerance for Min-Max Number of Sentences in a Paragraph Please state your opinion in the following format, for example: A maximum attention span of five sentences per paragraph for atmospheric description; A minimum of a sentence per paragraph for sharp dialogue in battle scene.

Write POV based on your character's voice. Let your character's soul guide you as you narrate what your character is doing 'right now' in their world. If readers say, "protagonist 'should' have done this or that..." Congratulations! You've created an authentic character that even readers found...