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  1. witch_sorrowful

    Sad posting

    And, anyway, my skill is so far is never going to make past the first few sentences of an editor reading it. Might as try to get people to read ... what I write. And practice. I guess?
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    Insert controversial title here

    It's the answer, but is it any good?
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    ? But why? It looks so serene!

    ? But why? It looks so serene!
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    What a beautiful background.

    What a beautiful background.
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    Insert controversial title here

    Add Lemon Juice to Yogurt and let me know what happens.
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    Just throwing this out there

    Do readers give a novel time until the first 10 chapters? Just curious.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    This is ten percent luck, twenty percent skill Fifteen percent concentrated power of will Five percent pleasure, fifty percent PAIN And a hundred percent reason to finish the project
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    Edgar Crow and his friends will now sit at Central Perch.

    Edgar Crow and his friends will now sit at Central Perch.
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    Flourish vs plot

    The king of flourishes with plot is Stephen King. You can move it forward if you change the make of the voice in your narration. I think flourish is very important - although in context of webnovels, I'm no expert. But without it, every novel sounds the same. For example, you can't elicit...
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    Oh! I hope to get there one day if I ever complete my backlog.

    Oh! I hope to get there one day if I ever complete my backlog.
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    Why aren't people using quotes and dialogue tags?

    Funny enough, James Joyce does exactly this in Ulysses and Finnegan's Wake.
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    Is it too late to turn my story into a Sitcom?

    Is it too late to turn my story into a Sitcom?
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    Yay, congrats. Are you gonna publish it here, or are you gonna go look elsewhere?

    Yay, congrats. Are you gonna publish it here, or are you gonna go look elsewhere?
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    charge readers to read chapters?

    Honestly, I write here to get read. Don't care about the money as of now, and there is always Patreon or something. I just want people to give feedback more than anything.
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    Which part of the writing process do you struggle with or fear the most?

    Writing is about discipline, isn't it? And I have none of it. I either have a day of inspiration, or weeks of doldrums sitting around and doing nothing.
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    YES, I DID IT! NEW CHAPTER https://bit.ly/3y0V8Qt

    YES, I DID IT! NEW CHAPTER https://bit.ly/3y0V8Qt
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    Writing How do you find a balance in your leadup vs primary conflict?

    I would quote some examples here. Apologies if you haven't read them (cause I now Spoil). In Oathbringer (Brandon Sanderson), the leadup conflict is a major point of failure for the main cast. It happens roughly at the half of the book. The important part is the failure. I think not only does...
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    #CaffeineAddictsUnite

    #CaffeineAddictsUnite
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    What makes a hatable villain?

    I suppose, handling remorse is very difficult (American History X does it brilliantly) in stories. I think it will be better to be honest and write about what you feel is irredeemable to yourself. I for one, find betrayal of oaths, the slavery of humans, denial of identity almost as bad as rape...
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    What makes a hatable villain?

    Voldemort, if anything, is a very well written character. And that one word doesn't describe him completely - he has ambition driven to the extreme, he seeks control over everything, even mortality. Racism is a subset of Voldemort, and his intrigue in the first five books was about his search of...
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