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A good smut scene is easy for the reader to to visualize with play by play descriptions, and paced just slow enough to get the reader hot. When done right, the scene will get the reader off.

Not really...? I treat groups acting together as one single unit --with their own paragraph of actions-- and use plural pronouns. Example: At the bottom of a wooded dell, a group of Stark soldiers on horseback stepped out into the meadow. At the top of the hill, the Lannister soldiers...

I'm glad I could help untangle the mystery behind writing fight scenes. ☕

It sounds to me like you achieved a perfectly balanced adult pulp fiction. Congrats! ? ☕ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If one wants to Self-publish, one needs to read all the small print. -- Some vanity presses/self-publishers are definitely better choices than others. ☕

Well, since you have decided that my guides are mediocre, and that I am pretending to be successful -- despite over 30 titles published to my name... Where are your writing guides? Also, how many titles have you published? Who are your publishers? After all, in order to judge me, you must...

It is supremely unfair, which is why so many authors flocked to epublishers, and self-publishing.

Surprise? -- I have multiple titles in all four of those publishers. Kensington is one of the 7 biggest mainstream publishing houses in the US. However, the royalties payments are piss poor and every 6 months. An average book contract gives the author 8% to 12% of the 'Net, which is what's left...

Kensington Publishing eXtasy Books Loose Id Books <-- defunct, moved my titles to eXtasy. Mojo Castle Publishing Better? ☕

Oh wow... Who pissed in your Cornflakes this morning, Mister Troll? As for my books... GoodReads? That's all you checked? Seriously? Snort. Also everything I have written, beyond fanfics, has been successfully published by one of four actual publishers. Not one was ever rejected, or...

Surprise! -- They were instructions. LOL! Description is Love -- and an author should always love their readers. That's how you do it. I see... -- Thanks! Yeah... I tried, but someone always makes a fuss. Anyway, thanks for reading my essay! I hope it proves useful in your writing...

First of all, "Slice of Life" in the professional publishing industry is more commonly called "Contemporary," as in; modern-day fiction. It's not a genre, it's a milieu, a backdrop like Historical, Sci-Fi, or Fantasy. At least, not in the US. Other countries may differ. What this means, is that...

You use their Names and Physical Descriptions to differentiate them. Also, making sure that No two characters Act or Speak in the same paragraph goes a long, long way to helping the reader keep track of who is doing what. Example: From Diabolic, Chapter One WARNING: R-18!

You can try by focusing on Love rather than Romance. Love and Romance are NOT the same thing. Romance – an emotional manipulation technique designed to make someone receptive to Sex. The motive behind Romance is LUST. Love – when someone’s happiness means more than your own. The motive...

Very true. -- My apologies.

Why create tutorials to begin with? -- To answer questions from other writers. The thing is, my tutorials are all prewritten. I merely adjust them for the sites I post them on, and I have a lot of tutorials out there already. The bulk of the 'definitions' I use are already posted in other...

But that's so much Work...

Personally, I just wanna write instruction on how to do stuff. -- If I stopped to define why I do everything I do precisely, I'd never get to the instructions -- and the tutorial would never end.

Oh gods... You want me to make the tutorials Bigger?! There's a reason why my longest stories End around the 100k mark. -- I could never write something as huge as Attack on Titan or Game of Thrones. I'd get so very lost so very quickly among all those characters -- even with all the plotting &...

Sigh... Pardon me while I fix this. -- You have two characters acting in the same paragraph, plus the line is Backwards --the Reaction comes before the Reaction-- because of the word As. "Hey Daniel, do think Santa is real?" "No Jimmy, if he was he probably would have died a while ago."...