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My stories are character-focused stories. The plot is something going on in their world that they either can deal with it or watch it blow up in their faces. So, no I haven't had a character go crazy, because they are their own people. I know their personalities and know how they will react to...

It's hard. True, I think about 95% of the stories fuck it up hard. It all depends on the intelligence factor they are going for. For someone more intelligent than the average man, let's say a full-fledge Einstein. A character like that requires extensive research, so what comes out of their...

Ah, :3 well, my advice is there for anyone who may need it.

I currently have a character whose plans work about 1% of the time and most of the time they have to think on the fly. xD Lloyd, characters are simple. The important thing is to show rather than tell. Maybe a combination of the two. Show how dumb a character is by making them fail to...

I love writing long chapters, but I have learned that to get the better engagement you need to limit them between 1-3k words. Just cut up your chapter of 10k to 4-5 chapters. Look for natural pauses in the narrative, then split it there.

Grats Lloyd :blob_aww:

I'll tell you how to get better. Write and publish what you have. When you publish what you have, listen to the criticism. They aren't being mean; they are just trying to help you. Doesn't matter how harsh they sound. Also, ignore those who are plainly hating with no feedback. Hasn't happened to...

xD well for first attempt it isn't bad. Which is why i say i hate drawing kids. The legs and arms are supposed to be small. And that is his lip xD. Maybe i will fix it again later. But I see what you mean about the eyes and brows. c: maybe remove upper.lip hm...

Heheh, without you, I wouldn't have this. 100x times better with your advice :3 and I added the light I had forgotten. I kinda used a simplified version of the riley method to do this one. :3 Circles, lines are my best friend, but expressions were my downfall.

:sweating_profusely: :blob_aww: Thank you for your help, blob! Once again, what would I do without you? You save me each time.~

I would really like to keep the smile, hm... Did the adjustments to the eye and made the smile a little closer to those I see on the web atm. I think it is better now :3

Ah, flashing of teeth. Is it an aggression thing? I was going for a wary smile or cheerful smile as he was happier that he caught her than actually falling. Hmm... maybe I should look that up. I did all this blind. xD With no references or anything.

Not to me. I had such a hard time doing these ten-year-olds D; Maybe because it was the first time without training wheels. :sweating_profusely:

Hm... It will be a difficult thing to pull off if you are going for the uneducated route, then having to force down years of knowledge in a couple of years. Unless the boy is very smart/genius already... Well... you know, it will take the boy years to learn what normal people take 18 years to...