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I would recommend my story, but :3 I am currently thinking of ways to revamp it while making it shorter chapters. I mean, if you don't mind long chapters, then go ahead. c: The first book is completed, the second book is about to be completed published and the third book is ready to be...

Well, some peeps are like that. Don't let them get to you. Your device sounds very good. I mean, this is all fantasy-based, even sci-fi elements are fantasy. A little magic here and there isn't bad at all. c:

So, if I am getting this right the AD is like a CD or a storage device that saves data+videos, right? And it looks like those old devices that played those big cds. If I am right then. Why do people think it's a multipurpose tool? I have 0 idea. It says pretty clearly that it is basically a...

Hm... I guess you could explain it first. Have an exposition of the details and what the device is suppose to do and how it works. You can also add what draw backs it has. Usually anything with magic isn't risk free. c: I would need to know more about the device/invention to say more.

:blob_aww: ? Yes, thank you~

Awwwww, poor greenie! He wasn't useless! :< He was scared. Bad Papa! The other kids tried! :c

Yes, you should see a hospital without us. It doesn't run. :< We do heavy lifting too. Those 300-pound patients don't move by themselves. Which is why I wanted to be part of the order (other... Stupid autocorrect) group. :blob_no: The one who didn't want higher education and no labor work, but...

Damn... I should have gone with that. :c

Wait, is greeny still terrified?! :c Poor baby.

Brilliant Diamond Pokemon for switch :3

:blob_no:I don't do rage games. Bad for my health. But I am looking forward to seeing someone play it and rage in my place. It looks so nice.:blob_aww: But I am sticking to waiting BD to come out in 6 days :3.

I am sad to say, this isn't only an issue for native speakers. This is a problem that plagues everyone who writes. You should see how some native English speakers write. So don't feel bad about that. Ways to improve are: Get a read-aloud program/website, use Grammarly, ProWritingAid, and listen...

For all four seasons? Hm... You can avoid the religious symbols by using something that represents the season itself. Hope these help! I also placed a picture for reference/inspiration to hit. :3 For fall, you could use multiple leaves, turning golden/orange. For winter, you could use a...

:blob_aww: Watch series, drawing/painting, and gaming while waiting for my license finally to come.

Heheh, I am trying to think of unplanned chaos that is good, but I can't. :c Usually it's doom and makes no sense.

Oh! He is the sentimental villain. :3 The one that the world walks on and wants to hurt everyone in the end. Hehe... He is the perfect villain to root for. He isn't evil for the sake of being evil. No, the world turned him like that from what you told me. And he kind of is right to lash out. I...

Mine is a trilogy so... Gates: The Gate of Shadows Souls: The Eternal Souls Fractures: Sike... Not out yet. :blob_aww:

I am ashamed to say; I don't know who he is. :< But it is true. :3 Even a story about a villain, in their eyes they are the most righteous person in the world!

:blob_aww: I always strive to get better. So I know there are others out there like me, too.