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  1. whitesculptor

    Spooky

    Probably just wanted to scare people.
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    Looking for Feedback

    The first chapter was really exciting to read. It built a lot of tension and mystery, remarkable. The second, however, killed everything you built. Perhaps, if you had a few more chapters slowly unraveling the mystery, adding character x, and then y, etc. Opening up to the world and allowing...
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    Is it true that some authors spend time describing a character eating breakfast or the texture of toast?

    As new writers read more and more their brain will automatically seek greatness. That's when they try things like Tolkien and realize 90% of what they read before was 'trash'.
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    Draft Synopsised Summary Attempt #1

    Write the story. It's good
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    Smut!

    Thought there was plenty of GL
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    What’s fun when ‘Reincarnated as a Monster’?

    I've read all of them and I find them more interesting than slime anime. Rimuru was interesting on the first chapters, grabbing skills and actually being monster phase. After becoming human like, the story becomes a lot less shiny—socially boring even. Not to forget becoming op too fast which is...
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    Draft Power Ranger Story

    Honestly, I'd read it. I don't see it much as a magical girl kind of classic thing but very good plot as a typical fantasy isekai start. Considering he's going to have a chance to redo one of his regrets makes me question if he can still kill her again, or if this promise binds him otherwise...
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    Smut!

    What's the most wicked smut ideas you can come up with? (Might use it/can be any genre)
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    What genres of music do you listen to while writing/reading?

    Over and over is too damnn good!!!
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    Please assist/ rate my leveling system

    I'd subtract the parameters each time the player went on a higher tier job making job change a bit more meaningful and reliant on the character true desire.
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    Looking for narrator(s)

    I'm not the best person to judge either something is disturbing or not, because to me fiction is fiction, art is art. A lot of people that are sensitive, therefore, unable to separate both realms. My favorite voice for narrator is the one in soul reaver
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    Looking for narrator(s)

    Unrelated but damn, that Alice cover looks so good!
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    Cheats that you had seen in your entire reading life.

    I figured adding drawbacks could potentially make the MC feel the risks of further using said systems, making it a bit closer to gambling away which can be addictive by itself. That and well, there's nothing wrong about losing sometimes, otherwise, you could very well make him draw a talent that...
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    Cheats that you had seen in your entire reading life.

    Make him get negative talents causing him to lose some if not 99% of the cheats he has. Kind of like a restart.
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    Favoritism

    Who's your favorite character and why? Can be from any source.
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    Would you date someone with a history of cheating?

    Once a cheater always a cheater. People don't change.
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    What's the origin behind your profile pic?

    Dungeon defence novel
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    A Fantasy Scenario Quiz

    CACDAEB
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    Beta Readers No Longer Needed

    You can always post it on scribble and put a poll at the end, people will let you know if they're interested.
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