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Thank you very much for such a detailed feedback. Definitely need to do a lot of work. Im still learning how to write. Now i have a better understanding of what is wrong. The Reasons given were very informative. I agree on all of the point of contention raised. Man wish i had this feedback in my...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763205/journey-to-eden-prime/

Basically i exist

Damn.

damn nice. Best of luck to you my friend i read your novel, it was a fun ride. ima sucker for mystery and supernatural plot with good world-building

Interesting. So will it be on amazon ebook? What the title name?

I read the first chapter. it's an interesting premise. The execution could have been better. Just some constructive criticism. The biggest issue was lack of clarity. The chapter jumps between different perspectives and events without clear transitions, making it confusing for a reader like me to...

thanks. Yeah. both Serena and Lina were first-time customers.Alos Alex is like a charmer type. He just is smooth enough that he gets along with the ladies lol. still i think did too much as they were practically head over hell XD. As for Alex is said to keep his dream close to his chest. It's...

Sure that would be lovely. Eden prime is my new series ive just started. Its not as rough as the other previous one. You can post your review here in the forms. If you feel like the story is good enough to deserve a review. Then you can do it on story directly. Give me your thoughts on what you...

Sory ill give you the link again. Journey to eden prime https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763205/journey-to-eden-prime/ Updated my mistake. Gave the wrong link. ?

Check it out if you find it interesting enough. Please give me some feedback on how you like the first chapter in the comments here or on the chapter comments. Would be greatly appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763205/journey-to-eden-prime/

A boy with daddy issues contemplating life as his ass gets send to the shadow realm by a metor strike. Only to find that even death and luck resent him too much. He gets cloned for a boy scout soilder pogram where big men breed big stronk MEN. gets beaten to a pulb. Trained by physco expert...

Im looking for feedback as well. You can review any of the 2 stories from my original. Thought journey to eden prime has only one chapter. Ill check out your story after my office hours ?. Journey to eden prime https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763205/journey-to-eden-prime/glossary/...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/763205/journey-to-eden-prime/ . My new series hope you like it.

I want to wat him tbh. me starving for some good ass mutton. XD

2 hours tbh.

Looks professional. Great job

guren laggan space brothers rezero code geass steins gate Castlevania samurai jack i got a lot of favourites lol have to give you a massive thumbs up for putting heroic age. This is something like finding a diamond in a coal mine

Interesting. The plot thickens ?

The thing