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I respectfully disagree. I understand where your coming from but in the third chapter, the general has developed as well as the other characters. the judgment of character is very subjective here. I mean the general is not even evil tbh. he is just using the organization for his own goal. The...

Ye. Thanks for the video. I will try to implement the teachings. I started writing again. Ahaha. My previous work that I showed you called journey to Eden prime. Your videoes helped me thanks Marc.

Thanks for the feedback. i edited the mistakes out. As for gobo's features, I just left them out because his race and features will be in another chapter.

I wonder if you will even find it interesting but I'm dipping my toes in to uncharted territory. Hopefully it's not as a bad start as my other series. ? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/814751/journey-to-eden-prime/

ahh, thank you. This is a desperate struggle fo the mc. I think so as well the first scene captures ut better for the story.

I got a scene that I wrote with two different styles. can you tell which one is better? More impactful with a better grasp on what happening? Don't worry about the terms like terra shard. etc just give me your opinions. Im thinking about how to approach this as I write it. Scene 1 A little more...

wonder if I get cancer or vampire rating. i suck lol but why not get a rating :blob_evil_two: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/622748-transmigrated-as-a-villans-older-brother/chapter/623841/

eat spaghetti and forgete. Rinse and repeat. Or you can break the cycle and make sticky notes lol. Whatever you choose. Though me personally spaghetti bruh

Already lived passed that. It's an interesting experience tbh. My friend back in school forgotten. My college friends forgotten. I have memory loss issues and constantly my father had been moving through out the country due to different deployment area in the army. So yeah I only have a few uni...

I just watched gotg3 in cinema and I'm actually speechless. I have never felt so attached to characters in one sitting. The way the plot and character were utilised was magical. Man what a fitting end to the trilogy of guardian of the galaxy. Rocket and quill were amazing. Pretty much every...

meteor strike. I just had to do it.

sorry Sometimes you just gotta figure that out by yourself

Honestly not for me. Sounds very meh. Just my opinion. If you want definitely write it.

*chugs it down* well now ima go to the toilet because i forgot I'm lactose intolerant

It just starts an endless cycle of conflict. Once one superhero emerges, it's only a matter of time before super-villains appear in response. And then more superheroes will rise to counter them, which will lead to even more villains. Meanwhile, the world suffers, engulfed in the chaos of their...

I have never played cs. Only valiant butt jj

Interesting.

7 hours. bruh I get mentally exhausted by my job. where the damn genie when you need one lol

bruh this is not even a question. choosing myself regardless

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I'm offended. Time to go on a cance- I mean time to cancel you.