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Due to unpopular demand and the desire to find more ideas, I have decided to open this thread to lack of fanfare. What I think my credentials are: 1. Have made big newbie author mistakes myself in my first novel, especially how it started. 2. Actively planned and engineered a new novel to fix...

Maybe i should do a feedback thread... but i am a dirty system writer so rip.

Wait for story to be approved and appear on latest series. Don't upload any chapters until you fall off latest series. Once u fall off latest series (usually a day or less), then upload once a day, or two a day if u want. Dwell time on latest series depends on timing that you upload - I find...

Same dude.

Quite good, the POV swap was a bit disorientating. Maybe would have worked better in third person, but otherwise I like it, very clean and smooth.

It's pretty good. Read a few chapters on Royal Road before. Like the chill vibes.

The mysterious stranger entered the room and... shouted with all his might, his voice resounding through the Earth. "Want to learn how not to suck at writing?"

Lord Arthur, First Among His Kind, Slayer of Beasts, Layer of Wenches.

In a web serialized novel, no one is going to care about thirteen names in the first chapter because they are not immediately important to them, even if they are important down the line to you. Your first chapter is really the make or break in such a format - it's basically game over if you...

I've learnt a lot over the past few months of writing my own novel and made many of the same mistakes you did. I've read your blurb + first chapter 'Moreen', so here are the elements I spotted. 1. How many character names did you introduce in the chapter 'Moreen'? By my quick counting, not...