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I went through a few commissions already, but most artists seem to lack these traits: 1. Draw accurate battle postures 2. Draw sci-fi futuristic armor sets 3. Willing to draw tanned skin characters with grey-ish hair (I don't know why but all three artists I commissioned hates this...) If you...

might try this myself LOL

I think you need to design the clones such that even they don't have the perfect picture, and have them make suggestions that the MC will not choose. A good way to show agency is to usually lay out the options, and have the MC choose an option that doesn't exist. Since you're the author, you can...

I just read a few chapters of yours, and I think you're misunderstanding what the reviewers are saying when there's no agency. Your specific premise directly removes agency from the MC. It's not because of the suffering, the hostile prince and miss edgeworth, it's because of the clones and...

A commercial diver who salvages crashed satellites in the spacecraft cemetery https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spacecraft_cemetery - but he finds a satellite from the future by chance.

Forgotten Diviner of the Depths Eternal Warden of Currents

Damp Diviner of the Depths. Perpetually soaked.

There's 2358 sci-fi genre books on ScribbleHub. I'm rank #1154 - which means I'm above 50% of all novels on this website. Lets go....:blob_teary:

Thanks for the great feedback - I agree with what you've said. I'm too used to writing about tech stuff that it doesn't flow well enough in a story form. I think you nailed my main problem - I write exactly like how I talk, and I talk 50% fluff. I do really need to cut down on fluff, thanks...

That actually made sense to me - thanks for the simplifcation!

I'm not a native English speaker and writer - I never did well in grammar and shit like that. I write like how I think and that usually turns out terrible. I recently received a feedback from a review swap on Royal Road, but his explanation is not entirely clear to me. My stupid self can't...

Made it to the top #10 rising stars sci-fi, rank #920 overall now.

Ok sounds like a good world background, but this shouldn't be the prologue. It's effective a super long lecture. About 4432 words? Some parts are important, but not all of it needs to be slammed in the prologue. I personally info-dump in my story, but this is way too much. Maybe split it up...

That's not crazy either, that's just lack of compassion. Definitions of words imo. Maybe with a hint of sense of self-served justice in fact.

I don't really see how bringing live pigeons to a starving family is crazy or misunderstood. They are starving, no? I don't see any example of her being yandere anywhere here. Sounds more like a happy-go-lucky girl with PTSD, that's about it.