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The funny thing about maid outfits is how it has become fanservice for the ladies as well, what with the abundance of artworks where boys are forced to wear them.

Heh, I don't think I'll ever be able to put that much effort into writing. I just write and publish, with no further editing. I don't think it's worth it unless you're writing for an actual book you're going to put up on Amazon.

Eh, forcing yourself to write would only lead to subpar work. Sounds like you just don't like the direction the author is taking with the story.

I understand that feeling. Whenever I got a negative response, I tend to lose my urge to write.

That's a common trope in isekai stories where it's about noble politics and such. And people want the MC to be smart, even as early as a five year old.

Urgh, I kept feeling that my descriptions are inadequate. For Japanese webnovels, sparse description is common and expected, but if I'm going to go after the higher level of English novels, I still need to improve my prose. I could sit on it for days to really make it juicy and succulent, but I...

Ah, that's a fair point. Thank you for the advice. Though I feel like adding a header that says "My Past Life" is too intrusive. It just breaks immersion, you know. I'll try to fix it. Then maybe I'll ask for your opinion again. (y)

Ah, that's because my protagonist is a pervert who are really desperate for sex and companionship. I know that's a terrible mentality though. Which is why he is a "worthless man". :s_tongue: That's the word I had in mind to describe his condition. It's not necessarily a medical depression...

Yeah, maybe I should've used third person POV instead of jumping between MC's POV and his sister's POV like that. He doesn't know all the answers though. He's a failure in his previous life so he can't just straight up be a successful person in the next one. I don't know how you'd fit that in...

Hmm, I dunno. I find it adorable. :s_tongue: Yeah, I'm not sure how to write the summary to be honest. To get to the exciting part, I have to pretty much spoil it. If not, then it's just a story about a loser getting a second chance in a fantasy world. Heh, incel protagonist, huh? I would've...

You ever got a dream of your story getting bombarded by bad reviews? Because I just did.

Alright, here we go. Fire away at the story on my banner. Hope I won't regret this. ?

Alright, here we go. Fire away at the story on my banner. Hope I won't regret this. ?