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  1. Vnator

    Is this a good synopsis? Would you want to read this story?

    I guess uncomfortable was what I was going for with what I asked the artist. Ugly bastards are pretty uncomfortable, and the crossed out circle is supposed to be denying them. I'll poll other peoples' opinions, and maybe change it in the future if it would push too many people away. Thanks for...
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    Is this a good synopsis? Would you want to read this story?

    Also, the reason I put the notes first was to describe the kind of story this is to those who might be looking for or be chased away by an adultery-based romance, since that's not at all what the story is.
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    Is this a good synopsis? Would you want to read this story?

    Yup, writing synopses is my weakness which is why I'm asking :P The cover's mainly to get people's attention and have them think "wtf? I'm going to check this out." He kind of looks like the lovechild between Mr. Bean and scary Bilbo, and I that got a laugh out of me. I'll probably cut the...
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    Is this a good synopsis? Would you want to read this story?

    Is it too long? Are there not enough details? Do I come off as condescending or like I'm looking down on something you enjoy? Sure, it's a dumb story that got out of hand from the one-off shitpost it originally started out as, but I want to make sure anyone who might be interested takes at least...
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    Unpopular Anime Opinions

    Personally, I don't mind wish fulfillment, but I'd like to have a protagonist that has to at least try for what their aiming for, and not have everything handed to them on a silver platter. At the same time, I'd also like such a protagonist to feel like they deserve it (ie. not be a total idiot...
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    Word Count

    That's a ton! Most people put out something like 700-1500 words a day if they do publish daily.
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    Brute force Vs. Strategy Vs. Protagonist correction

    I'm personally a fan of brute force after strategy. Use planning to understand, simplify, and do away with the bulk of the problem, but then use brute force for whatever is left or if the plan went wrong somewhere. That's what I did for my first book!
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    Rate my beat

    Napstablook, is that you? But for real though, it does have that slightly spooky vibe to it, but it was pretty interesting to listen to. It would work well as a back track to some vocals or a melodious instrument, but it's really chill on its own.
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    One question about writing a villain:

    Have some kind of conflict between both of their ways of thinking, while having them agree on other things. That conflict would make a great basis for a story!
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    So Psychic Powers are b*llsh*t

    Yes. Anyone else get annoyed when the final villain of a movie or game needs to be a superpowered threat so writers almost always default to giving them psychic powers/psionics? It really feels cheap and makes me completely sympathize with the guy from the Wizard Destroys all Psions
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    a cool concept for anyone who wants to use it...

    Hold on, if you're going to get upset about the lack of smut, then you'd better post that with a Slaaneshi marine instead!
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    a cool concept for anyone who wants to use it...

    It's coming up! Just have to read through what I've got and edit it to make sure it's all good, and finish a few more chapters for the current arc. And then it'll be out!
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    a cool concept for anyone who wants to use it...

    Shit, did you read my mind? I've already started a backlog on a similar story, but the dude just wants to live a normal life after crawling his way out of rock bottom. And he's sent to one of those worlds but with a lot more ntr, which is the main reason he rejects everyone's advances. Of...
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    You’re Fired

    You can do whatever with your story and post or sell it anywhere, but so can they
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    Feature in my new novel I'm working on

    Is there room? Because I want in! :D (Mainly, I just want friends)
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    Stating The Reason Why You Wrote The Story

    Huh, never thought of adding that. For the series I'm writing, I pretty much got food poisoning and after not having eaten anything much for 4 days, and in my utterly delirious state, I somehow churned out the entire outline for my first book! There's another story I'm still planning out, but...
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    Would like clarification on what exactly views, page views and readers statics represent.

    From what I've seen/heard around, views represent the number of people who've clicked on your story, but have not necessarily read past the synopsis. Chapter views represent how many people have actually clicked on a particular chapter, and readers are registered users who have added the story...
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    Just putting my thoughts in the forum well #1

    Remembering people? I literally set aside a section of my google doc to list people, their personality points, and how they interact with the main character. But yeah, I'm going to recommend what others are saying as well; use a cheat sheet! Take notes! And maybe try to keep them neat?
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    Is my Second Story good?

    That's fair, but the pov stays with one character for the entirety of the story though, and he just meets the new characters, with the very rare perspective shift. But thanks for taking a look, and I'm glad you think it's solid!
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