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Tbh, I feel the exact opposite. Whenever there's a lack of prose, I feel like the story is lifeless. If you don't describe at least the material of the walls, or how the river flows through the city, then the entire place just feels empty to me. It is especially annoying when there's an in-depth...

Well, I guess I can try later on, will send it to your inbox.

Well, to be fair the scenario was based off a scene in my novel, where the dragon was destructive and had every reason to be in geo-synchronous orbit. Guess I should've thought that through before turning it into a prompt. Eh, whatever, that assumption is valid anyways.

I will be honest with you, without the popular tags and especially without a cover and an eye-catching synopsis, you won't get much of an audience here. The premise doesn't seem too interesting for royalroad either. Of course your writing can be so good and the twists can be so interesting none...

You may want to post this in NU forum since legendary mechanic is there, if you already did, then just ignore this message. That being said, people differentiate between the body and mind a lot despite them being basically the same. So perhaps it's just to show a difference between "I can lift...

After some time reading fanfics in Wattpad, the only way I'm genuinely cringing at my old writing is if I look at my journals from elementary school

We need more stories with actual god protagonists, most stories with god protagonists are just typical LitRPG Isekai with the tag slapped on. Like have the mc actually do some deity stuff like destroying the world and remaking it from the core up since it was so shitty. Edit: my next novel is...

That is an option, but the kingdom is quite concerned for the safety of its people if a flying rock of death is right above your territory and has a chance of fucking you up. Better hope the public doesn't find out about this or they'll get to you before the dragon does.

Even if I post the biography of some random dude? I'm surprised tragedy has a two digit percentage.

Mf typed WMD wrong, oh well it's funny so I'll keep it. Yes, the kingdom is a patriarchy so you have to make that strong, independent woman know her rightful place!

Because the planet is round, the dragon is going so fast that it falls around the earth rather than falling to the earth, hence in orbit. What I mean by in control is that it isn't spinning uncontrollably because of this, and can still turn its head and stuff. The kingdom did some scrying and...

Ay, don't make me choose, my favorite stories have a mix of both. In any case, if the writing is mediocre then I would probably enjoy a humorous attempt rather than a serious one.

My main antagonist is an abusive dad. His household just happens to be an entire nest of city-destroying dragons. And now they're on a road trip to torture some teenagers!

Ah yeah, I forgot legendary resistance only worked against things with a saving throw. You'll probably cripple yourself using wish that way though. Now we're talking! Will it be fine if the dragon happens to be a himedere and spends all your money on expensive shoes?

God dammit, did you multiclass into a bard or something? How is that even supposed to work, the thing's schlong is the size of a skyscraper! Legendary resistance says hi

You are an archmage tasked by the kingdom to slay a dragon, but there is a catch. The dragon is falling around the earth in low orbit, at such a speed that it is always directly above the city you reside in, it is durable enough to resist this while remaining conscious and in control. You are...

Your story has popular tags and the writing seems pretty good. Make sure to keep posting daily at least for the first few weeks, since it'll keep your current readers interested while attracting more. Imo, you're pretty much set up for success, at least on scribblehub. But if you want a clear...

You forgot smut, in fact a lot of novels that lack some of those tags still do well if there's smut.

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I shall begin, though I'll only contribute one line for now I was born in Austria...