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  1. JayDirex

    Looking for Work Commissions by skilled Japanese artist!

    Japanese Artist should learn to speak English, like the rest of the world :blob_okay:
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    Learnt a new word!

    With one of the best fight scenes ever: Riley Vs Huey (48 seconds, that double kick)
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    Learnt a new word!

    Huh! And here I have been using that word since I was kid. Saying certain people live in the "Boonies" (meaning rural). Or saying "he out in the 'docks'" (meaning boondocks). Fun to know its a Tag word~
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    How can I make my Synopsis/Description more interesting?

    Anytime, but I want you to remember this part because it's important: Your story is about: 1. A character. 2. Who does a normal thing. 3. Suddenly something abnormal happens/conflict 4. The character(s) now has to resolve this conflict. And this right here is a hook to the reader who...
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    How can I make my Synopsis/Description more interesting?

    I got you bro. I got you, bro: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/jays-synopsis-formula-will-work-on-your-novel.2379/
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    Guys, I now know how to prologue. Yay.

    Yes, they're trolling. Because they know you don't need a prologue at all. You heard right. YOU DO NOT NEED A PROLOGUE What you need to know is: The story begins on page one. Repeat: The story begins on page one. It doesn’t begin on page ten. It doesn’t start in chapter five. It starts on...
  7. JayDirex

    "Yes Martha, I did kick the baby, but she looked at me funny."

    yet they voted his grifting family back in.
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    Overthinkingggg chara personality

    Yeah, I know what you mean. A suggestion. When you have some energy, take your character out for Tea/Coffee and ask them to tell you a story. 1. Ask them about their parents. Were they strict, easy going? 2. First kiss? Where? In school? How did it happen. 3. let them tell you that story...
  9. JayDirex

    Do something

    I'm under attack! :blob_dizzy::blobrofl:
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    Drama vs. Melodrama

    Mom, no!!!! Technically this is drama but we all know this fails the believability scale.
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    Drama vs. Melodrama

    Drama vs Melodrama In a drama, the conflict a character faces is realistic. The conflict arises through a logical and reasonable series of events. In a Melodrama, conflicts are exaggerated and intensified to elicit stronger emotional responses from the audience. Drama: my mom is in the...
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    Random novel

    1. Keep it on Earth. No world building. 2. Make the problems interpersonal so that the issues are about people. 3. It had still better be interesting, original, and entertaining. And life altering for the MC.
  13. JayDirex

    The typical [drought of a writer's motivation] cry for help

    Only highly motivated-beginners seeking dopamine rushes from posting, and those getting paid good money through patreon- post everyday. The rest of us post once or twice a week. Many less than that. Why? Because we understand that the same readers you are killing yourself to get a chapter out...
  14. JayDirex

    Writing How Do I End a Story?

    Stop with the Carefully already. it's tired and played out.
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    Looking for Teen Beta Readers

    What you're really asking is: What do teens talk about? Teens in general (and no, I don't mean you weirdo introverts that hated high school, everything is not about you drama queens). Healthy American teenagers in general are highly social. Almost everything about them requires input and or...
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    When you write an outline, how much detail do you go into?

    Your chapter outline is missing some things. 1. What is the goal of this chapter? 2. What's the most interesting thing for the reader in this chapter? The purpose of the last question is to force you to write something good. Because there are no filler chapters. :blob_sir:
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    Quick! I need to find the most disturbing smut title on ScribbleHub currently with a link

    I'm surprised you guys didn't post @tounokenja story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/394333/the-milf-i-married-is-my-exgirlfriends-mother/
  18. JayDirex

    Ever happened to you?

    Don't listen to these liars. If any of them ever wrote more than 10K words, than they DEFINITELY WROTE SOME BS THAT didn't hit the mark. Sometimes we see it right away while editing. Other times we come back to it and go, "Oh, wow. That's flat." But the better question is do we re-write the...
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    I have a problem with writing

    Lol, Hans this is SH. Readers won't remember your name after a chapter.
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    I have a problem with writing

    It's understandable. The story playing out like an anime in your head is cool, and you'd totally watch the story as an anime. But to actually sit down and write it...Meh. Let's not forget, writing is MENTALLY TAXING and just. too. much. work. for any type of novel/story that you aren't either...
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