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  1. JayDirex

    too far...

    Text is written, and we do discuss writing here :blob_reach: :blob_hug:
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    How do you feel about betrayal?

    Exactly ^ ! @TheEldritchGod Eldritch, Don't blindside the reader like that. What you want is the reader to be also sympathetic to the friend, while also dropping hints as to why the friend will betray the MC. But the point is to get the reader also on the side of the friend, with more lead up...
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    Historical Fantasy Gripe: 'The Smart MC'

    Bruv, what you are reading are amateurs who strip the stories of all subtext. There's no true "story engine," where the MC gets to actually show some impressive knowledge to a reader based on an expertise that he has, like a good author would. So what you are reading are the copycats who just...
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    A question for Shakespearean fans

    Othello! See the movie with Larry Fishburne. He nails the character. @Agentt
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    Tiss. you folks went and found a handful of stories just to nit pick. And I'm not playing your RIDICULOUS game. anyone with two eyes, and spittle, not even A FUCKING MODICUM of sense in their head can see, when they come to this site, from the Trending pages ALONE. THAT THE MAJORITY OF THE...
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    my dude :cautious: Every. single. Effing day. you can go to trending and find that most of the top 25 have sexual nature tags. GB, GL, HAREm, Genderbender, ARE SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    WOW this is delusion and the end of this convo.
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    it proves my point because i didn't have to look. I went RIGHT TO TRENDING. just like I would have any day. And as far as the joke of GL and GB being the only way to gain popularity may be a "Slight ever so slight, exxageration" is putting a lot of their faith in their non-sexual story. Listen...
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    your argument can easily be destroyed. Good lord
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    Once again, you are being deliberately OBTUSE @AliceShiki Saying Action and Adventure is the most popular is like saying “Readable by humans” is the most popular genre. And stop pretending HAREM does not equal Sex. all of the BS I highlighted in all of the stories shows that SEX IS THE DRIVER...
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    @AliceShiki @SailusGebel Are the both of you being deliberately obtuse? Of course ACTION AND ADVENTURE are top because 100% of the novels on SH are action and adventure. But do not pretend for a minute that sex is not one of the main drivers on SH. Don't pretend SH is a place for pure...
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    Reader Reception: SH vs RR! (rant warning: f-bombs abound)

    The same for me there and here. My stories are literally ignored on both sites. :ROFLMAO:
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    writing a fight

    I answered some of this thread on fight scenes. Read this whole thread: Post in thread 'Fight Scenes' https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/fight-scenes.3870/post-100189 @Camgfd
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    Writing How do you guys persist on creating another chapter?

    Readers, mang. I write chapters up until the readers stop reading them (usually if the per chapter reader count drops under 30 views in a 5 days) Then I'm OUT!! STORY DROPPED!!! I don't write to an empty room.
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    Is it ok to pick up a dropped story?

    Go ahead and finish it. Just Label it as fan fiction (on this site) in everyway possible. In the synopsis, tags, even a mention of the author in the first chapter. "This is Fan Fiction" I doubt the copyright squad will hunt you for a three year old dropped story on SH...
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    What is that one BS item that your character has access to?

    Now Now, items with OP kinds of power like that have to have consequences **Depletes the wielder's HP/Stamina * Takes two weeks to power back up. * leaves the wielder susceptible to (mild) demon possession. "This is the law of equivalent exchange"
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    Why is my novel isn't showing on ranking or in recent upload list?

    Because it hasn't been approved yet. I know because you just joined today.
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    Should I continue current novel or finish and release a separate one first?

    *pat pats* @Wiblurneko :blob_reach: These dudes will tell you to keep going no matter what. But that's bullshyte. A quick search shows me that your current story only has 11 readers (and that's because the type of story genre is not that popular up here, but I digress.) Who the heck wants to...
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    Writing MC With Mental Illness as a Power

    That's up to you. in an old Mel Gibson movie, "Conspiracy Theory" that was the case. The MC, Mel Gibson, was a total paranoid weirdo.....but the viewer finds out that even tho he is nuts, his conspiracy is correct, and (some folks in the gov) were truly looking for him. ^ And that was the...
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    Writing MC With Mental Illness as a Power

    they just say that to excuse their repugnant behavior. Murder hobos in these stories are not mentally ill. They are just A-holes that need to be put down like dogs.
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