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I’m adding mutated beast smut to my novel from now on. I need views.

Looks like you’re on your way to a book deal and worldwide stardom.

RE: Slave World? Reincarnated by the god of lust into a slave world with my own harem of monster girls in heat.

Honestly, applies to a lot of novels. Almost any novel here. Actually, people should try reading in his voice. Just like reading dialogue and using Christopher Walken’s voice.

Isn’t that just reading stiff dialogue in his voice?

Reincarnated as a farmers boxers.

I don't think reviews here carry as much weight as other sites, and readers are quiet overall. You just need to post. If readers like your story, they'll follow. Leave author notes at the bottom of your chapters. Maybe someone will respond.

I remember as a kid watching “Horror Express” and it scaring the shit out of me. Whenever I woke up to go to the bathroom at night, I couldn’t make it down the hall. It’s kind of funny now, though.

I always had this feeling that twincest is more common than people think. I don’t know any twins, though.

I wouldn’t use the capitals. It makes it a pain to read. If you do want the titles to stand out then quotes are better. I don’t think you need either, anyway.

I write the novel on my computer/phone, with character profiles and chapter notes in notebooks. Writing personalities/backstories by hand burns the character in my mind, and flipping through chapter notes helps me avoid writing the same thing repeatedly.

Don't take this as me ripping on the story, because overall, I like it and will continue reading. These are just my thoughts. There's quite a bit of information readers can gloss over without missing anything. Examples would be eating before their challenge, the Proctor's overly long dialogue...

Do you mind checking mine when you have a chance? Not necessarily asking for a review, but any feedback or thoughts would be appreciated. Thanks Stellar Winds Blurb: After sending generational ships to habitable systems within 20 light-years, humans became an interstellar species. But the...

In most of the gender bender fictions I've read, it appears solely for world settings where women rarely fight or adventure. It's a way to explain or exaggerate how underestimated their character is. A typical scene is the young, impossibly beautiful mc walks into the adventurers guild and...

My biggest insecurity is the flow between sentences and paragraphs. Although I line edit, use speech to text software, and add transition words whenever possible, I never feel my flow is adequate when reading other works.

“X” is a catboy with no friends, has never had a girlfriend, and works for an abusive boss. One day, a curvy fox girl known for her combat magic and large butt asks “X” to join her in a heist that can oust his boss from the workplace forever. Follow “X” as he makes friends, learns combat magic...