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You don't have to trash it. You could always rework it. What I do usually is reread my story after a long time passes. And that makes me add and refine things. Fill plot holes that might've formed by mistake or inconsistencies in the writing. You could always just trash it and start over...

This song reminds me of Yandere or an obsessed villain. Hm...

It feels wordy and needs to be condensed down a bit. In my opinion, leave the exposition of the story to the story. Usually, in the synopsis, you'd introduce the MC and where the story is headed. This has to hook the reader into wanting to know more about the story. Of course, this is all...

Usually happens when I remember a story I read long ago. I remember details that made me want to experience it again. Then I find myself fascinated again by how good it was! :blob_aww:

I love toxic relationships/situations! I like my yandere men and women alike! Most of my MLs are either borderline yandere, if not a full one. If I'm honest. But I agree, they are the best for a plot purpose. :blob_whistle_two: Obsessive love is similar to unconditional love.:blob_aww: *Only in...

It all depends on how descriptive you want to be. You don't want to repeat the same word too much, even if it's anatomically correct. So, have to use different ways to express what you want. Bell, length, walls, heat, core, and soft lumps are some of my favorites to use in romance scenes. I...

Yes, for some reason, I thought of him. :blob_reach:

:blob_aww: Why does everything I look at that you do remind me of a show or game? I see that and I think of Dragon Ball. Is it the art style? Hm... I don't know why. For some reason, I am always attracted by bright colors. It's where I look more usually. Though, it's a nice piece of work!

I've finally become someone's Sensei! Life achievement completed! :blob_reach:

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Thank you! Glad to be back!

Then they aren't human. There isn't an ounce of humanity in them if they can't change. And I guess that makes them a complete psychopath. Funny enough, even psychopath have second thoughts because their actions affect them. They feel and think like we do. And even though they have narcissistic...

Blob! :blob_aww:

The most important thing to create a likable character is growth, giving them flaws and relatability. The rest will follow once you have that. We, as readers, tend to like characters we relate to in so many ways. For example, its always good to combine characteristics than just focus on one...

:blob_whistle_two: I didn't casually disappear and reappear with no goodbyes! Nope, wasn't me!

:blob_pat_sad: How sad. No Yeti review for me.

:blob_blank: Oh! Someone posted on here and my wittle eyes caught it. ohohoho! What do we have here? Sail is reviewing stories... I'd love a cold and calculated review from our very own yeti from the snowy mountains!:blob_aww: I don't care where you roast me...

Oh my holy gods! No! Why! This can't be happening!!! I'm going to drown!!! :blob_shock:

No! I refuse! I will stay dehydrated for the foreseeable future!:blob_whistle_two: