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BG3! I still can't stop hearing Raphael's battle song. Chefs kiss! A game has never made me stop mid-battle to just hear a song. :blob_aww:

Okay! I took much of what you guys told me in my previous post and tried to use it! That was from my first novel (I might revisit it later to improve it, but if I do now, I'll never finish my other novels), and your feedback was great! The only way to know how I did is to ask again, so here I...

Haha, you're correct! It is a Romance novel! It may not be your cup of tea, but thank you for your thoughts!:blob_hide: Though, I'd be wrong to say it's romance alone. It's Fantasy,romance, psychological, horror, action, and adventure; it has a bit of everything. I've even had people tell me...

You could try Inkitt for smutty novels. I like posting there since it's more open to GxB stories. :blob_aww: But if you're looking for GL, nothing better than SH or maybe tapas for BL? Nothing wrong with BL and GL.:blob_no: Depends on what you're looking for. Could also try Wattpad.

:blob_aww: Thank you Blob! :blob_pat_sad: I know! I learned not to do that! But I didn't know where else to put it so I left it there.:blob_no: Probably could've waited until after the fall. Hm... Note to self. I was trying to portray curiosity and desire for companionship rather than romance...

Oh, I see! I think I got it now!

Fishy... What settings where you thinking of?

Bunny Lead!

Oh! You mean more dialogue to express what other characters see. Hm... I do that also, but my dialogue isn't hanging alone if you get what I mean. People don't just sit down or don't do stuff while talking. I like to show what they do while they are talking. Are they picking up a bottle or...

I see it now! New unlock achieved! I see what you mean! I just had others tell me not to describe too much, or it becomes a slug. But I'll try to balance it out! I know what you mean, Snowy Yeti! :blob_aww: The omniscient gaze allows readers to know everything. I wanted them to experience the...

Thank you, Yeti for your cold words of wisdom! This is a consequence of tools making me feel that different words other than however, are bad to use. Fml. Keeping in mind. I see! All of my grammar is self-taught, so I'll also keep that in mind! Hmm, I see. Not sure what you mean by repetition...

You have more strength than me then. Hahah.

Wait until you have work. You won't have time for anything. Haha! 4-5 times is fine.

It seems I'm a dying breed, but I prefer hetero relationships. Here in SH, though, mostly GL is the way. So, give the D and leave the P alone unless it's the other character getting the D.

Just write my dude! Grammarly Premium is pretty good, though! Haven't tried the dictating stuff. And you got to read their suggestions. Sometimes they are way off!

:blob_happy:I try to comment since I know how much it means to an author when you do. Heck, SH should do little interactions like Inkkit has. There is rarely a need for comments anymore, but you still know what the reader thinks because of their little interactions. :blob_aww:

Uh, the only way to learn is to make mistakes! Just write and have fun!

:blob_blank: Can't say I suffer from your issue. But, uh, maybe work out those frustrations before writing?

:blob_evil:Better not forget, Yeti! Or I'll cast a hex for a ghost to haunt your dreams in those freezing mountains you live in!