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April 1st won't make me lie to myself about not writing. Do I write or not?

Dude... how can you make a 'yes' and a 'no' choice be chosen at the same time?

@Rachel_Leia_Cole another author wrote me like your work.

Does this story have a hook? Well, as a reader, I would be drawn to the part I quoted in your fiction premise. My heart would be drawn to the 'caring for family' theme. Sibling affection is a universal human emotion, especially for those who have a good relationship with their younger siblings...

Seeing the feedback requests on Feedback Section tickled me, and I wanted to leave simple feedback. But I'm sorry, but I have to hold back. I can't do that right now; I'm focused on my fiction. Maybe another time. I don't want to touch someone else's kitchen while mine is still burning...

Narrating power systems and lore without feeling like an info dump is one of the most difficult challenges in writing fantasy fiction. Can we narrate how power systems work? Can we narrate lore as the foundation of the story? No narrator's voice. No expository dialogue. Only subtext...

This is more than 3 sentences. I appreciate your honest feedback. Thank you. :blob_salute:

Dude... you got a 2.5 rating and then it was deleted. You're lucky. Your luck might be better than mine. I got a 1.5 rating from a random reader who happened to be passing by, no review, no comment, just a cold, selfish assessment. I hope you continue to have good luck there.

Tricks for Building the Living Dialogue The first trick is to imagine the conversation as real dialogue, put yourself in the character's shoes, empathize with your character. What would you say in that situation? The second trick, is to use body language to deepen the meaning of the...

Is this a complaint that a free reader should make to authors who spend months or even years writing fiction without pay? I'm not sure... your comment is universal, your comment is more about subjective preference. For example, he @Omarfaruq is both the author and the reader. But he liked the...

This thread is based on reader preference assessments; you should read it carefully before asking for feedback. The OP didn't offer constructive feedback as an author from the outset; he offered preference feedback based on his honest experience as a causal reader.

Have you read all the referenced chapters in this thread? If so, I'd love to hear some comments (1-3 sentences) regarding my chapter for any impression or brief feedback.

I don't understand your point regarding Aiko's omniscient first POV. Omniscient first POV is typically used only for historical narrators who know past, present, and future events. Meanwhile, first POV with single character is typically limited and in-depth. If you're trying to portray the world...

When the universe seems... To refuse us to write... We have time but no ideas... We have paper but no ink... We have resources but no passion... We have passion but no resources... It's time when writers cry.