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I tried opening it but appearently the aliens took it?

"ijust " I'd fix this. But concerning the content, eh, why does a priestess need to make a name for herself? Why is she questing if she has no real skills? Sorry, it leaves me wanting more info, not in the sense of wanting to read the story but in the sense of why should I care, really? I don't...

You might want to link it here, for ease of access.

“who’s been carrying many stories in my head since I was a kid.” I hear that! Glad you’re putting them to paper now :) Fun premise, I bet you end up getting a big following eventually!

Hmm, some good stuff in there, I'm sure there will be some who will enjoy it, but not my kind of story really.

“When Lady Elise falls and strikes her head, Wisterly knows she'll be blamed.” I’ll probably be in the minority here but I kind of feel I want a bit more as to why? Not sure how you could add without bogging it down though

I like the idea, I might read this later. One question off the bat though ... how can an all-powerful god be losing? Sorry, I just read 2 lines so I have no sense of the context / meaning here. It's just the first thing that jumped out at me...

I should probably take my own advice here but I'd suggest shortening the synopsis - or having the first paragraph tell it all then a divide and the rest telling the same info but in expanded form.

Same

Neko, sry that’s catgirls right?

Ok, I've never posted here before but it seems to be for announcing latest chapter drops, so here's my pitch! New Chapter! Chapter 27: Heart-Shaped Hell When Candy wakes up to find her husband dry humping her in his sleep while whispering his old school crush’s name, she vows to make him pay...

Hey would you prefer the feedback here or on the personal message we started the other day?

Thanks so much for the feedback. You've asked some questions that most others have not yet, so definitely getting a unique point of view from you. I can't wait to answer some of those questions, I'd love for us to go back a forth a bit on that. And yes, a review would be great, if you don't...

Sorry I could just google it but I'm here, what's a 'grimdark' genre?

yeah sounds fun. Sorry for the short reply too I’m just in my phone here. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1543202/cameron-to-candy/

I’d be down. I have a slow burn study set in an oppressive patriarchal midevil society. So similarity too yours but also opposite in other ways. Maybe a three chapter read and review?

Yeah, fair point. I think it works more than I originally realized. I retract my previous comment. "Amateur scientist, Rowan Vale, had seen it all—every time sweet, metallic blood had landed on the glass in front of them and every time a body had slumped down in its chair. Punctured. Their...

no idea bud... but I wouldn't do a sequel if it didn't get traction. But if you like the word you build maybe do something set in the same one but with different characters or feel?

“Do you believe in life after death?” That’s one of the oddest lines I’ve ever read.