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My preferred word count is 2,500 - 7,500. I hated the prompts offered during the third competition so, so much! They were so ugh! How to cook an egg? Switched body part? Amnesia? Blegh on all of them! If I can sum it up in one sentence then I think a prompt is a failure! A good prompt needs a...

The classic movies: Pulp fiction, Jurassic Park, The Good, the bad and the ugly. I think Ghibli films have a real nice look and atmosphere but their actual stories are really weak, with no build up or tension and being instantly wrapped up in the closing act. Classic books: Don Quixote, The...

Wow, I actually already wrote an isekai. Actually two. Maybe more if I'm forgetting any. The first one has to do with an angel kid living on a cloud city being talked into jumping off of the said cloud city by a talking balloon in order for it to find its master. It's kind of a reverse isekai...

I'm in my apartment on a Wednesday night, browsing various internet forums on my laptop when I hear a knocking on glass. But I live on the fifth floor, so what could possibly be making this deliberate rhythm? I turned my back and what I saw was a middle-aged man in a navy blue jumpsuit. Hanging...

Has anyone ever had the feeling of after writing a chapter and reading it over that it's either the best thing I've ever written or the worst thing I've ever written? I mean, there are some things about it I really, really like, but there are also some things I'm not sure about. I'm thinking to...

I am also interested in learning how to use photoshop to make a cover for my story.

Okay, you know how some words sound sharp and edgy, and how some other words sound round and wavy? Apply the same principle. The name Olivia sounds like someone who is calm and collected. While a name like Hannah sounds more wild and energetic.

I want to make people happy.

Hey, it was pretty good. The fact that I could only find that one little thing to nibble about. I like that the main character's motivation is clearly conveyed and relatable and the world seemed to have an interesting magic system.

I've watched until episode 6 of the first season. The occasional choppy frames are a bit distracting. I don't like the switchblade weapon as it feels extremely impractical, almost like a joke weapon. Also that grappling hook weapon that was able to act like a kusarigama with the way it was...

I request an onomatopoeia list.

For the first sentence, saying in after reside is redundant. You call something endless too many times. For your second paragraph: You describe legendary warriors as "so powerful, tales and fables of them and their historic achievements were spread among countless worlds." That's literally...

My main issue with the first chapter is this part: Hodge racked his brains. He still didn’t understand why Zeta cared. “Umm, seven, eight maybe. From what I’ve heard they’ve all been young girls in Greenwich.” Then he buried his head in his hands again. “Dammit! That means I should’ve seen this...

I read the first chapter and your writing style seems awkward to me. Using upon instead of on in the context of the narrator feels stiff and needless. You used rather too much. It's like using really or quite too much. It defeats the purpose of saying something is more so than ordinary if too...

I don't really listen to music because I think I can focus better without it. But sometimes when I'm listening to a particularly sad or exciting song it gets me in the mood to write something sad or exciting, or some other emotion.