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    Goals! Everyone has goals right?

    Long term: figure out a good long term goal. Short term: get something to eat.
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    Kurtzpel

    Turns out they're reverting the paid classes and stat buffs. But I hear the pve in the game is pretty bare. And I fear the damage done at launch may be irreparable.
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    Drawing Requests

    Okay. I have no reference pictures. But it's middle ages, so if I were to supply you with any it would likely only be from google. Arthur is wearing white pirate shirt under a brown vest/jerkin. He's got brown wool pants. And black boots. Something like these: Something like this for...
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    Drawing Requests

    I propose for you to draw a scene in my story. The ML is in the backyard/garden of a mansion and he's looking up at the FL who is on a balcony of the mansion, overlooking the backyard/garden. ML: He had short raven black hair and big slit eyes that gave off an air of composure which always...
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    "Why Reader Stop Reading" poll

    You should write romance.
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    There is.

    There is.
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    Kurtzpel

    15 minutes until launch!!!
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    SSSC IV

    Prompt number 3 made me think of a post-apocalypse story in a world where the only civilizations left are cockroach ones. And the story would be about a group of cockroaches attempting to find The Bottle - their only hope for salvation. It gives me Metro and 9 (the movie) vibes. I probably...
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    How have I not read the princess bride yet!?

    How have I not read the princess bride yet!?
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    That's really cool. Not the bullying, the game making.

    That's really cool. Not the bullying, the game making.
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    Training to be a better writer.

    Loved the read. It's always nice to hear the experiences of experienced writers.
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    If you can't make sense of the madness, you'll go insane.

    If you can't make sense of the madness, you'll go insane.
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    I ask for feedback

    I read the first chapter and didn't very much like it. It was mostly a person exploring a place. I didn't really feel any sense of agency. I think you were trying to make the reader feel confused, but I think having the reader be confused for too long feels too aimless. Sometimes when you try to...
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    I ask for feedback

    Alright, that's fair. I'm mostly going to say my first impressions. I'm not very good at in-depth analysis.
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    I ask for feedback

    I'm not writing to be popular. I don't want to write anything. I have nothing. I simply want to write. I would never run out of ideas for a story. Please tell me what you think about the contents of the story.
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    I ask for feedback

    I have concluded the first arc of my story at 11,000 words. I think that probably makes it ready for critical feedback; or that it is long enough or finished enough or ready to be judged as a whole. Uhhh, I don't really know how to do this. I ask for things you liked and disliked. I admit the...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I was here
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    Super bored

    Super bored
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    Picking up a story

    I think you should find someone with a similar mind/writing style, someone you trust, not just the first random nobody who volunteers.
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    SSSC Feedback and Suggestions

    :blob_neutral::blob_unsure::blob_hmm_two: Alright
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