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but if u get up to do something then you would lose it immediately. so bedridden?

same

i saw the possible inflation of my ego if i started writing.

Y laugh:cry:

Thank you, I will see how posting on royal road goes.

This is personal opinion, but it feels like your prologue is too short to be necessary. Feels like you're trying to shoehorn in despair into as few words as possible. You either drag it out for three chapters to build emotional investment into the MC so the readers root for him when he goes over...

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Disagree, LitRPG is probably one of the hardest genres to pull off if you get your system wrong. Quantifying strength on a global scale is far worse that marking relative strength in a single instance. But thank you for the feedback. I agree with everything else. It is not an isekai.

Black market

god damn that was fucking hard

I need da story

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Feedback me. Ty

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