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    New story premise (looking for feedback)

    It's similar to a Transmigtation, The main character will essentially have one place where they return to often for directions from a primordial entity *no spoilers* and will have gotten strong enough to do something that seemed unthinkable before in hopes to ultimately cross the gap between the...
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    New story premise (looking for feedback)

    What did you like about the premise that made you want to do so?
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    New story premise (looking for feedback)

    Stop, Collaborate and listen, Ice is back with a brand new addition. So here's the idea. Some guy is painfully normal, Like he never did anything challenging, Never got pushed to do sports, Never pursued a talent, Never followed his passions... But then the world is ending. Humanity got hit...
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    Opinions on this premise? I might write it!

    This was a rough draft of the idea. This was a rough draft of the idea. I really liked the premise and it actually reminded me of the concept of Tokyo Ghoul in a way with how the factions are divided. The beauty of the story is that the protagonist is just that, A protagonist. He is capable of...
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    Are you a "well, ackhchually"?

    Well, Ackshually...
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    Thinking of writing a story, Any Opinions on my premise?

    The idea is that the main character isn't actually loveable. The character is able to be sympathized with but isn't a hero and will hurt people and make poor decisions and it's made very clear by the opening sequence. I'm not sure if I should write it though because a lot of people in Authors...
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    Opinions on this premise? I might write it!

    Thank you for all the opinions! I see that my premise needs to be fleshed out more and that I will NOT be writing this story until I can explain some plot points ?
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    Opinions on this premise? I might write it!

    You think? Any opinions? Like or dislikes or potential improvements?
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    Opinions on this premise? I might write it!

    I've written a story here before but pestered out due to a lack of solid structure and purpose. With renewed vigor, I'm back to write out a vision that I've had and I'm excited to try to write toward whatever niche may genuinely like to listen! Here is the Premise; Man has created a...
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    Thinking of writing a story, Any Opinions on my premise?

    I've written a story here before but pestered out due to a lack of solid structure and purpose. With renewed vigor, I'm back to write out a vision that I've had and I'm excited to try to write toward whatever niche may genuinely like to listen! Here is the Premise; Man has created a...
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    What are peoples thoughts on authors allowing their readers to finish a story for them?

    It's an interesting idea. Honestly, I'm on board with that. If you're no longer interested it seems far better to let a fan continue the story where it left off to bring it to a conclusion. If you allow multiple fans to do it, They'll all gravitate towards the story or ending they "like most"...
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    Dumb game idea called League of Ledge

    The abilities have to be strictly random with a high chance to get one that does nothing But the best power up resets all your opponents to the beginning
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    What type of horror do you like?

    Psychological, Specifically Hopeless Horror where the characters rise and fall only to realize their actions never actually mattered.
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    How the heck to market a story?

    A case of cosmic irony I suppose.
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    How the heck to market a story?

    I see, It truly is tragedy as old as time honestly and you have my pity, Not to belittle you but to come alongside you. Seeing this second chance is wonderful and if you're really dead set on it, Be my guest. Don't take the community so personally, It's a little rough around the edges and to be...
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    How the heck to market a story?

    And as for this, Please just take a break. You've done a good job and you're at your breaking point. Don't become a slave to your work, All good stories have an end. You can always put down the metaphorical pencil and take a second to breathe. You deserve to after all your contribution.
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    How the heck to market a story?

    Oh why thank you! I'm flattered, Challenging ideas and expanding thought is honestly something I love giving and receiving. I'm glad to contribute to this flaming plain of war and chaos. ?
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    How the heck to market a story?

    As to this, Good on you! It is a good idea to check those options out. I guess my biggest question to that would be; With such a heavily established narrative and so much investment, Is it truly worth uprooting that to pursue fame and clicks? I think it might be time for a check of your...
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    How the heck to market a story?

    I love how small the community is, It's funny in a way that one person can stir all the active members into a frenzy. What would that have to do with me though? Is it the idea that I'd be review bombed by someone because they're upset that I debated them? I'm still a little bit confused but...
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    How the heck to market a story?

    I'm a bit confused by this, Why would I be in every debate thread had I joined earlier exactly? Sorry if I'm a bit slow ?
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