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    Book Idea (Looking for Feedback)

    To flesh it out a bit more; The goal is to build a staircase to the heavens. It's revealed through a vision after day of sluggish progress that if he doesn't hurry, he will never make it back to his body to reunite with his loved ones. Not going for a time loop but the afterlife thing is a bit...
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    Book Idea (Looking for Feedback)

    Basically, I'm a busy person who has never had enough time to write consistently. Instead of forcing a square peg into a round hole or sacrificing time with friends or work, I've decided to instead make a book that works for me. With that in mind, here is the premise. A man wakes up from a...
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    What food y'all having for New Years'?

    I'm 25% Italian and Greek and 50% hispanic, our food is going to be off the walls crazy. We start off with some chili from my mom, then the pizza, then the seafood pastas, Tortillas out for shrimp tacos and some Greek chicken are to be expected. Please don't get me started on the family size ?
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    More short chapters or fewer long ones?

    I'm writing a comedy cluster-truck of a novel and because it's scope is so broad and nuanced, I only make 1000 word chapters at a time. For my first real novel it helps me organize it scene by scene which helps my brain a ton in organizing thinga like motives and structure. It's important to...
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    Finish the saying!

    There are just some things you can't take back, that isn't one of them, take it back. Life is too short but if we breed short people then it'll make life look taller. Never bite the hand that feeds you, unless it's uncle Mike, he can't be anywhere near children. Never look a gift horse in the...
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    Disliked by strangers.

    ?
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    Disliked by strangers.

    I think the author is just playing hard to get and qould actually like you to pursue them into the sunset with rose petals.
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    Heroes and Bad Heroes

    What if his reality warping powers revolved around being able to tell lies and the more people that believe them, The more powerful it gets. For example, His boots start to malfunction as more people begin questioning how a guy with his intelligence can make high tech gear. It also allows his...
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    I made a dream journal

    That's crazy, I had a dream about a pig headed snake telling me to go tell my music director to name his son Ahmud which supposedly meant "Child of the awesome God." ?
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    Good afternorning

    Good afternorning
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    I made a dream journal

    Do you think it will do well? If it fades into obscurity I don't mind. It's very bizarre and indirect and it's moreso a personal project but it would be a little silly if people became interested in whatever strange thoughts my brain came up with while I sleep.
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    Alternate Scenes and What Ifs

    I've had a situation like this. My comedy book is slowly becoming a dumping place for all my outlandish ideas and it's kind of interesting. It has a magic society of isekai trucks trying to send this man to an alternate world so he can save it. The alternate world called Igoroth retreated...
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    All authors who use systems in their stories are creatively bankrupt.

    I've only ever seen one system story, That being omniscient reader on webtoon. Wouldn't it be funny if there was a story where the system is essentially a character in the story who gives the quests, Very ridiculous ones at that, then you find out that you were basically isekai'ed into a cosmic...
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    Stonefist?

    Thanks! That'll be 5.99$ plus tax. I also accept tips. (Turns tablet around)
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    Stonefist?

    If he's upbeat, You could give him a funny name like "Stoned Fister" Otherwise you could him Grit. Grit embodies the emotion he is currently using to hang on to the will to make up for his mistakes and not wallow in sadness which is quite easy, Especially for upbeat characters which tend to...
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    Funny Insults You Heard Someone Being Called.

    I SNORTED OUT LOUD READING THIS
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    Gantz could be a fun game, if it is made with today's technology.

    Curses, Foiled again! I'll get you next time you meddling anon writer!
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    This spoke to me

    POV: nihilism
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    Gantz could be a fun game, if it is made with today's technology.

    Hey guys, I love this idea! Whoever suggested this and/or agrees with it should really get in touch with me so we can put this in reality! I'm a govHobby enthusiast and I would love to watch whatever whatever this is, My favorite game by the way, but put to life! Please contact me with current...
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    Recommendations Give works that primarily focus on illusion magic plox

    We all make mistakes in the heat of passion Jimbo.
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