This is a isekai right? So why would you consider adding a Dodge ball chapter as your first one? There's no hook, not any I see it, and it might be just me. Your synopsis is fine. That's all it about it. You're cover is hand drawn I think you done it well but I'm going to be honest it isn't the...
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Haha I'm sending you to the shadow realm-nya