No. Maybe add this to it:
Father is a sigma, and sells him to to a noble. He then sexually harasses people like his life depends on it. Gets teleported to Brazil. Become waifuless. And finally gets into the arbitrary hell hole of hoes and sigmas
https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/ai-syntax-puts-me-off-from-reading-further-is-it-just-me.25571/
I used to use ehm dashes a lot. Now I can't... Nya
https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/nice-to-meet-you-from-japan.25572/
Hello, Japanese guy from Japan. I'm hoshino. Welcome-nya You can call me Otonoshi
Shouldn't final thing of energy would be energy manipulation while completely ignoring the law conservation of energy, and mind be axioms, theorem, mind, mathematics, philosophy manipulation or something-nya
Hmm... I agree on that too, but it feels a bit bland to me well again that might be just me. Now for the second chapter, its better, I suppose.A introverted mc, and a extroverted character getting together, I think you that was your intention? She should've panicked more she seeing that...