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here's mine The reincarnated Archmage needs to learn magic circles | Scribble Hub

Here's mine, comments please https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096211/the-reincarnated-archmage-needs-to-learn-magic-circles/

Thank you

What your review on mine

oh ok sorry

I mean a system that is incomplete and makes MC a bug in the whole system

I read your story I Want A Harem But Not This Kind, and posted a review about it

I suddenly had an idea you know the usual Snarky AI/spirit/God interface/HUD that answers everything, level up, stats, inventory, map, etc. Basically making what's supposed to be a real world more like a video game...for our MC in most cases the system is a crutch for the author, so he doesn't...

I read your story I Want A Harem But Not This Kind,and posted a review about it Please check out my story too https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096211/the-reincarnated-archmage-needs-to-learn-magic-circles/

No I did not use Ai I just tried to be formal in pointing out ideas....now that you mentioned it ,it kinda looks like Ai Maybe I will just stick with paragraphs lot less Ai-ish Here is mine https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096211/the-reincarnated-archmage-needs-to-learn-magic-circles/

Anyways I am currently reading your story I don't mean to offend you,It is a great story but it needs some improvements Mainly - Comma Usage: Ensure commas are used correctly to separate clauses and items in a list. - Example: "She got back up and poured some hot water, then put in...

It's fine author's tend to forget about minor characters

Pl Please check your first chapter there is a guy called Ryuji

This is your book right ?

The story captures a sense of isolation and suspense effectively. The protagonist, a timid individual, eagerly awaits the arrival of his new computer, which represents a connection to the outside world.. until he realises that there someone or something else is 'stalking ' him in his house...

Sounds like the Ainz from Overlord

An Evil Overlord typically lounges in a ridiculously over-the-top fortress in the middle of Nowhere-Ville, scheming to Take Over the World (or at least the local coffee shop) with an army of bumbling, not-so-bright minions. Forget politics—no senate bothers with him, no Pope would touch him, and...

Thanks, singing magic might actually be pretty useful in a battlefield probably like the place the MC is staying is under siege and all MC needs to do is find a good safe spot and start singing The enemy would probably ignore or be confused by what they think is a crazy girl singing after all...

Yes thanks a lot that's exactly what I needed ? ? ? ? ?

the language of the world is not one unique mother of all magic language language is a contradictory medium. A large number of users creates rigid meanings, while few users allow the meaning to become more flexible and increase its power. However, once there are only few or no users left, the...